All Comments on 'Afternoon Errand'

It was a good story. I like your story it told things from a different point of view.

I think it's funny how we (readers) get wrapped around the axle for things in a story that that don't meet our expectation on how a story line should go.

While I thought the story told a story of an event that happened. Other readers didn't like it because the woman fucked another man. They tied into you the writer for telling your story expressing their opinion in the comments. I guess that is what we do here comments.

Your writing always gives what you want the story to say. I say keep on writing. If I don't like I will let you know in the comments.

By the way 3 stars from me is a good story.

Was fun to read. I am not going to analyze the story. That is silly. We are here to have fun or not. That's it. *****

All these stories are only fantasies, so let's have fun and stop throwing stones at the writer. No one got hurt. *****

There's just nothing to this that makes it interesting. The potential is there despite the ridiculous way the sex is initiated, but the whole fails.

Do you have a clue on what type of story belongs in a Literotica categories? This, at best, is Erotic Couples... Although, it basically starts out as a rape, which isn't very erotic, and ends up as cheating with a brain dead wife...

10 Big Blazing Stars. Hot fantasy of seducing wife's friend. Women are continually taught by their mothers to resist sex while growing up. No Mother wants their Daughter to be a slut, and they almost always pound that into their daughter's head as a child in this country. Of course that strongly effects a young woman's sexuality for the negative reducing her ability to orgasm. Therefore, men, have to resort to trickery and subtlety to ever get ANY pussy since women seldom approach a man and say "wanna fuck?" Since they don't, men have to do all the work seducing women usually. In this case he quickly yanks her top off and attacks her sensitive breasts creating overwhelming sexual sensations of pleasure that she can't resist. This goes perfectly in "loving wives" cat since she did cheat on hubby. Buster2U