All Comments on 'Afternoon with your friends'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice story. Did not see that coming.

timmyid2timmyid2almost 2 years agoAuthor

I'm seeing some pretty neutral votes: mostly 3 stars. What, in your opinion, would improve the story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

more of this.. humor and satire are your gifts. keep up the good work

timmyid2timmyid2almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks Anonymous. I'm trying to think of a reasonable sequel, but I've another idea to pursue first. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story, especially as told from the cheating wife's point of view. The ending was perfect. No idea why the story got some neutral ratings.

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I'm a bi white male who finds all aspects of sex either exciting or pleasurable. I'll try anything once; twice if I didn't like it just in case I did it wrong. Some of the stories that I contribute are experiences that I have had with little to no embellishment.