All Comments on 'Age Gap Pt. 04'

Since this story was posted and I'm the first to comment? I suppose everyone's been reading LW stories and whining that there wasn't enough BTB, it was a RAAC, in the wrong catagory or some such. I haven't had too many good thoughts before about Jack but it seems that may be about to change. I have to say it takes some skill for an Author to cause me to change my mind about a character, I've found over the years unbiased first impressions are usually pretty accurate if one is paying attention. Not always, but enough to have made me wealthy if bets were being made. Sort of like if your loving pet dog takes an instant dislike to someone, if nothing else it should make you aware that something is amiss. So Chloe it looks like you are putting me in that position of having to change my mind. Drat, but I don't mind if it works out the way it should. Signed: BTW

I love this story so far Chloe! Jack and Candice will get their happily ever after! I also had great idea for another series you could make. I got the inspiration from adamaxilla’s story, Counting Freckles. A student develops a deep love/ obsession for his teacher even way into adulthood. It could be a sequel of sorts to this. Maybe the son of Jackson and Candice as the main character? It maybe interesting depending on how you end this.

We'll???

Guess we'll never hear about the two main characters finally interacting!!!

Just discovered this series. I'm bookingmarking you so I'll know if you pick it up again. One can always hope. Cheers.