All Comments on 'Agent Alpha Ch. 03'

Next asap please yesterday would not be soon enough!

This is a really interesting story. Strong characters and quite a dark tone to it. Just the way I like it. Keep this up!

Liking this. And great to get new chapters so quickly.

She just had to get raped huh still like it but FUCK!

Not a fan of the rape scene but it does seem to be integral to the plot.

The story, as a whole, is very well written. Rhys could use a bit more personality. His character often seems a bit flat with flashes of color.

Thanks. This definitely has me watching for more.

Things are starting to fall into place---keep the chapters coming!

All that taunting, beating her down and tearing off of her clothes was fine. But couldn't you have just had the pack attack the rogues before the actual rape? I mean what was the point if it was gonna be interrupted mid act? She was already gonna be traumatized enough by all the other shit. Pretty meaningless act here in my opinion, and just seems stupid if it was included just for the sake of it.

I, too, wonder if the rape was necessary. It takes away from things.

How could you write about rape?!!

you bad Writing whore!!

go kill yourself,bitch!

Erm... Some people seem to react to writing about a rape as if the writer had actually committed one This obviously isn't some pretty little Disney fairy tale where all bad things are prevented just in time. The rape didn't seem to be included just for the sake of it. Marek bitting her was essential, and therefore the rape.