All Comments on 'Aisha & Paul'

WOW! Great story. It appealed to me personally because, though NOT a southerner, I'm an older white male. And, as a city dweller (Chicago for last 36 years)but raised in a small town, I could understand Alisha.

Good job, keep 'em cumming.

Uncle South Loop

I love stories where you learn about the characters and it set up so the sex means more. Good Job.

I find in erotic literature it is the underlying passion of the characters' motivation that makes for an evocative story. Not just the description and details of the sex scenes but, the steps leading up to them. This story encompasses all of that and I GREATLY appreciate the quality of your work and STRONGLY encourage you to continue to contribute.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!

THIS WAS REAL SEXY. WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE

i love this! you absolutely have to finish because it reminds me of myself. I live in a small town and i want to experience a white guy but i'm afraid.

omg! too hot.

I had to fan myself off after reading this story. That river scene just became a fantasy of mine. :)

Very hot!!!

Aisha is a rude slut. But this story is still hot!!

OMG....that was so freaking hot!

Events moved way too fast. Aisha all of a sudden, after living in the south for years, realizes that the confederate flag isn't threatening? What did they talk about? Show us, don't tell us about events and how she becomes a different person.

Killer story. You seemed to manage a weeks long friendship into a one page story. The build up to the sex scene was great. But the story doesn't elaborate on her husband or the fact that she's married.

Good story except for her cheating. That isnt sexy