All Comments on 'Alena's Game Ch. 05'

So hot!!!

Wow, this is a first for me on Lit: Blundered into a multipart story in the works, invested in it, and feel cliffhangered, hungry for more.

I said it before, I'm hooked by Q's phased submission-against-resistance (without physical force) theme, unfolding under a skilled pen.

And I'm ignoring 'realistic' considerations of Q's alternatives, so immersed am I in the storytelling. Successful suspension of disbelief, is the term of art. Sold. Bravo.

~P.M.

each chapter is killing me, there so good with teasing and denial games and over all the head games. just can't wait for the next chapter to come out..

Terrific! Can't wait for the next instalment. Looking forward to finding out where she's taking it next.

I love this woman!... She has him....and me...in the palm of her hand!

I am at extreme risk of going on a chapter reading binge here... which I actually am trying not to do. Like Quinn before Alena, it might be a war I already lost and do not know it yet. Writing wise, the sensuality of it stands out awesomely from among the rest.