All Comments on 'Alex Keeps Paying His Debts'

by carl_a

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

The perverted humiliation is awesome!!!

Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
YOU AIN'T NEVER BEEN CLOSE ENOUGH TO A WOMAN TO BE ABLE TO HIT ONE, BILLY:

Turn your fucking caps off dickhead.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
NO MAN WOULD EVER ALLOW THAT TO OCCUR

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
LOL

This is so awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Total, unbelievable crap

He would have gone to the lawyer. And if she embarrasses him and he loses his job what's she going to do? Money doesn't grow on trees and no man, with an ounce of pride lets this silliness continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Too stupid

He quit his job and moved away. Never spoke to her again. If she wanted a divorce, get it for abandonment. It's either that or put the bitch 6 ft under. What a stupid storyline this was.

devilspydevilspyalmost 10 years ago
Hubby meet your bi side.

How humiliating. Now his daughter knows he likes his ass/pussy fucked with real man cock. She can see dad's shrinking little boy dickie and she can smell the sex and see the sperm dripping out of dad's ass. Ignore the stupid trolls. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Arse wipe

Carl-a sick you dyke your story is only good enough to wipe the sit from your arse

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Horrible gay crap by an insane author!!! MINUS 5*!!

Your crap is poor shit!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Disgusting Crap!

What a steaming pile of shit! ~ How about a sequel where Alex shoves a dynamite stick up Linda's ass after he's sliced off Tom's salami and shoved it down her throat. The story ends with one big KABOOM!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Get up Alex and get the hell out of there time to become a man and just disappear never to return to the whore especially now that your daughter has seen you like this you will never live it down so just go

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I do feel really sad for you guys with the humiliation fetish. Imagine having to fantasise about your daughter seeing you being raped by a guy whilst your wife encourages it....just to get off.

Lking4u2Lking4u25 months ago

Isn't it time to reprise the story and add Chapters 3 and 4...

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