All Comments on 'Alex, Sadie, Mum and Grandma Ch. 03'

Bit confused. Why did the mother act like she didn't know about the grandmother even though they met and reconciled in the previous chapter?

Where to go next. It seems that the women in your life may need to get together with you. What about poor Jed. Maybe Sadie should get caught alone on the Twinkle or the two of you get caught by Jed.

A good story that begs to continue.

This story has some potential but it’s all over the place and no continuity. Makes it difficult to read.

Sorry folks, all the comments are fair enough. Wrote this as a break from another story i am writing, hence the story has no definition or continuity.

Great story

Want to know about their mum past with grams and if family grow futher in future

Please continue with this story