All Comments on 'Alexa and Chantelle Ch. 02'

by zephyr20

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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaalmost 14 years ago
Welcome back!!

"Alexa and Chantelle" has long lingered in my mind as an exciting introduction with lots of great potential. It is extremely gratifying to see a 2nd installment!

And it is certainly maintaining the excellence you displayed at first. I'm very happy that you've continued it.

SeductionLoverSeductionLoveralmost 14 years ago
Very well done

And tantalizing. Hope there is more to come.

warriorpoet7532warriorpoet7532over 11 years ago
Very good but too short

You have set the scene in the first part of the story and now you have so much more you can go into. The descriptiveness of the BDSM is excellent but agonizingly to little.

Chantelle could have done so much more to Alexa and her subseviance could have gone so much deeper.

You also could have explored Chantelle's feelings for Alexa.

fitntrimfitntrimover 10 years ago
Wonderful!

Love this too! I don't care how long or short, that doesn't matter at all. Mmmmmmm. Utter submission and sensuality. Wonderful.

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