All Comments on 'Alexis's Revenge Ch. 02'

this story is a waste of time to read. The whole thing is just a cut and paste of some other story and then nothing happens to the characters from this story. Kind of plagiaristic if you ask me.

if you want to write another story, do it. but don't include it as in insert within an existing story line!

if you can't figure out a way to continue the current story, Quit. please!

He liked the story, so what? I didn't! it has nothing to do with Ch. 01, and nothing to do with your premise!

a waste of time and bandwidth.

leave me

wanting more

I don't think a good editor could save this sorry tale. It's neither interesting or remotely well written. It creates lackluster characters that could all die suddenly and no one would care. So NO! Don't write another part.

No one likes the story. It's poorly written. 7469 views - zero favorites. What more do you need to know?

But very, very, very bad. All phases. A complete waste of time to read. NEVER FINISH!

This was very, very, very bad.

You guys don't have to be a jerk about it we're your story