All Comments on 'Alex's Possessions Ch. 01'

by Phantomkirasparks

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great start, keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Try to change up your words

Way too much She. She. She. She.

I would say its also written so literally it reads like a court transcript.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Did you know that the word “anyway” doesn’t have a plural form? Good to know, right?

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