All Comments on 'Alice Dines Out Ch. 03'

She is certainly a handful, but is she worth it. Ben seems to think so. I'm not sure I would. Great story. I hope it isn't over.

I think you've been trolled in the scoring. This is well written and erotic. The problem for you are all the trolls on this site, particularly in this category. Made my wife horny as hell, as we fantasize about this stuff frequently, so for that alone this is great writing. Thanks

@ anonymous "I think you've been trolled:" Thanks. It's good to hear a friendly voice from time to time.

This is... just, wow.

I absolutely love the storytelling style. The narrative voice, the little asides, the insight into the character and his reactions as he rides out Hurricane Alice.

The sense of communication between them, the give-and-take, the feeling his way through the situation. "...seeing her reaction took the joker right out of me..." is a perfect example of injecting the reality of the moment in an otherwise unreal hotwife situation – and it's fucking amazing.

Hell, just reading the story description came across in Bob Seger's voice.

And for the record, no: I don't have a big old mansion on the lake. I'm more of a houseboat in a private cove kinda guy...

5-stars all day long.

A worthy read. 👍👍