All Comments on 'Alice Pt. 03 - Alice Again'

You pass this off as erotic; but it is just abuse at this point.

Imagine her face was beaten as badly as her ass, and why wouldn’t it be? Bruises are bruises, right? Why should it matter where the bruisers and welts are?

And that’s why this became abuse. BDSM isn’t about violence, it’s about power and control. A good Dom keeps the scene tight and safe and maintains control.

Using paddles, canes and whips are acceptable and fun but when you draw blood, the scene is over.

Because if you get off on hurting someone, then you’re not a Dom, you’re just a sadist.

a good piece of work here, explaining the thoughts and feelings of each lady here. The self spanking scene was cool but I kind of wish she had been caught. What happen to Caroline was explained perfect from looks of it to her feelings afterwards. I have no idea what the other commentor was talking about there was no signs of actual abuse nor any of blood, you actually stated the only broken part was the gap between her legs. Thanks for sharing and keep it up. looking forward to the net chapter.

Pappasleae!

Whackadoodle - I fear that you are consumed by your own beliefs and experiences, and I do not find your comments well founded, or fair.

It's a nice exploration of a D/s relationship involving a young lady who will clearly benefit from guidance and submission.

Pace is deliberate and considered. Feelings and motivation well explored and explained.

We know these people. We understand them.

Good work.