All Comments on 'Alice's Wonderland: The Cage'

The perspective that this was written from was a bit confusing but the story concept was hot.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

@Failedscout, The perspective of this story series is meant to be from the eyes of Sam, experiencing the events himself. If you're not used to reading things from this perspective, I understand it may be a bit confusing at first. Glad you still liked it, though!

I found the perspective confusing. You switched from first to third person, it did not ruin the scene but took away from it.

Omg what a great story! I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks so much for uploading this! <3

Also personally I didn't have any problems with the changing perspective.

Hi Sam! 😘 Good to see you over here too!

More please don’t stop there hot hot hot

Glad to hear people are enjoying the stories here too! (Hey snorn ;D)

@pink4bbc, So far, Alice's Wonderland had 8 chapters fully worked out, with still at least 3 more chapters to be written. I'm uploading them here one by one, but chapters 1 through 7 are already live on another platform.

Interesting beginning; odd perspective switch took some getting used to. Very short and quirky, hopefully they’ll be more character development and depth in subsequent chapters.

Love the start. Alice seems like a woman who knows and gets what she wants. Onto the next