All Comments on 'Alicia's Descent Ch. 04'

Absolutely wonderful, and a very nice twist at the end.

I hope you continue with this tale for many more chapters!

I loved the idea of club haven and wanted them orcs to keep violating the girls :( that said I am glad that with this development the maid won't be killed just to cover up for her mistress's whoreing. It would be nice if this raid was the result of mari ratting out Alicia and in the end Alicia getting disinherited. Perhaps with Mari blackmailing Alicia's farther and the two of them coming to an arrangement where they marry but he'd allowed to screw whatever guys she wants and Mari makes Alicica her slave, making sure all her holed are regularly filled by orcs and men and maybe monsters. and tentacles.

We're clearly on a similar wavelength, Anonymous. I'm going to try and get part 5 done soon and you may find your predictions nearer to the mark than you imagine.

Need more of this ;)