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All Comments on 'Alien Lesbian Tentacle Surprise 03'

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richie78richie78over 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this chapter. My only (really pedantic) quibble were the handful of typos. If Lit offers a proofing service take them up. Can't wait for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Have enjoyed the chapters very much, can't wait to read more.

You are a very good writer.

Little niggle, there are some typos which are easily over looked. However the fact that the girls are in nightgowns, dressing gowns and dressing downs was distracting. Also page 2, in about the eighth paragraph it reads

"Tabitha pulled the tentacle from her mouth. "Melody, yes, yes. You're tentacles are amazing..." Melody??

Sorry for being picky, IT IS a great read!!!

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