All Comments on 'Alien Mine Ch. 04'

Start using contractions! You yank the reader out of the story when you don’t use them. Making 4 and 5 ⭐️ chapters, 3 and 4 ⭐️s.

Thanks for the comments, they help make the story better.

Your lack of proper use of quotes is very distracting from a good story line.

Liking where this story line is going, but it's going to take a long time to get there.

Thank you for it

Great stories/series with a real plot. Writing style is good too.

I read the grammar comments. Contractions are not required. If they’re your style, use them. Sometimes contractions make the statement flow better, sometimes not so much. Your style is pretty good.

Study plural usage versus possessive to know best when to use an apostrophe s (‘s). It is never used for plurals (more than one) even though lots of people use it incorrectly. It’s either an “s” or “es” ending.