All Comments on 'Alienated'

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BladestarBladestarover 14 years ago
Wow!

OMG! That was so freaking hot! I hope there's gonna be a follow up on this story? Please!

Bianca_SommerlandBianca_Sommerlandover 14 years ago
Wow...that went somewhere I wasn't expecting!

It was fucking cool though! I suspected something when the comment about the pregnant woman and aliens was mention but you took me by surprise! That was fun.

Reminds me of MIB with the cockroach thing...only...sexy :o

mrskelleymrskelleyover 14 years ago
Liked it!

A good read!

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Weird

Great story with a very weird ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I must admit

I liked your "Roswell's Frontier Motel" story better. Don't get me wrong, the sex scenes in this were very well written and quite erotic- I just liked the other one much more (I'm a bisexual man and find that kind of bondage very arousing).

I'd love to see a rewrite of that, only longer and more detailed. Oh and: I recommend letting his cock be sucked by part of the spider, no need for him to jerk off ^.^

FestofishFestofishover 6 years ago
Wow!

Second story of yours that I've read today! Both incredible. You've got so many that I'll be reading your stories for quite a while and they are beautiful!

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...