All Comments on 'Aliens Invade! Son's Melting Mind'

This is delusional and a sad read. Clearly your not in the real world and probably don't get laid ever.

I enjoyed you story. Its out of the ordinary... but great, with good wording/writing. Thanks for your idea. Please go on with such luscious stories.

Maybe a little too much of the ‘Dear Reader’ shtick but otherwise very good.

Ha ha, this one has your fingerprints all over it. I love it and give it 5 big juicy stars my friend.

"Dear reader" parts read as the voice of that guy from "The Twilight Zone" of course :-)

I Imagine Daniel didn't even had to receive as much of that aerosol stimulant as his mom. It would make it even hotter imo as the perv just couldn't say no to an opportunity to have his hot moms pussy.

Even Patrick getting minced into data particles didn't felt that out of the ordinary for this story. We got aliens and their experiments, mind control, incest, characters being killed, narrator asking philosophical questions...you name it. What a gem of a tale people!

All in all a great story that I bet was easier to write (for you) than the sequel of "The Magic Ring". Was it?

Me personally? I got to see big ass mom Maggie and horny son Daniel in a hot scene so I'm very happy with this one.

Thank you for writing it. Liked it better than The Magic Ring part deux (which is not to say that TMR is bad!)

Once again a big THANK YOU for writing and sharing DD!!

Thanks for the comments, everybody. I was a bit surprised that this is my worst rated story, so any advice and tips are welcome. I had so much fun writing it.

Too much 4th wall breaking here, please leave that shit to deadpool.

I always love something different! Too bad about Patrick, but he was just a third wheel anyway. Daniel and his mom had fantasized about fucking each other, so this was something they wanted. They got what they wanted. 5 Stars!

You should have went into the gory details of his demise I would have to hell with those pussies who can't handle that

I would however lose the 3rd party talking in the same story if you feel the need to do that make it completely different chapters like chapter 1 the son chapter 2 moms thoughts and words chapter 3 dads words with the alien voice thrown in throughout dads words and thoughts of what is happening and course information on the details all the details leaving nothing out if the details are long either write a longer story or use different words that has the same meaning as all those smaller words you used to sum it up it's rated the lowest cause most readers like the details the full lead up to the main act and giving a complete ending with the details that comes after the main act the ones that lead to the ending while this wasn't a full fledge wham bam thank you mam story it lacked a lot of information and so it made it close to nothing but a stroke fest which most don't like though some people do you need go in between add more details leading up and more details leading to the ending