All Comments on 'Alison Goes to London Ch. 01'

by GrushaVashnadze

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Violet_VixenViolet_Vixenabout 2 years ago

This is some real theater of absurd.

I've never seen the word 'fuck' used so many times in one place - oh wait, I have... also from you.

You've created something both funny, but it also sports dark undertones beneath the witty one-liners.

There was no wasted space, every fuck, cunt, and cock meant something and advanced the plot. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.

ZoofManZoofManabout 2 years ago

Hilarious and with a suitably astute commentary on the state of one potential future for post-Brexit Britain; it's totally fucked.

GrushaVashnadzeGrushaVashnadzeabout 2 years agoAuthor

"Totally fucked" - in more ways than one. So glad you are enjoying this story - and I hope you will stick with it!

LobsterBLobsterBabout 2 years ago

This was a lot of fun

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteabout 2 years ago

5 stars. Funny and hot. The long slow fart was a nice touch.

uciboyuciboyabout 1 year ago

Very creative and very funny.

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I started writing smuterature because I had three big stories I wanted to tell: The Cursed Cunt (a story about vocation, betrayal, guilt and redemption) A Worthless Filthy Fucking Smoking Trash Cunt Whore (a story about addiction, relationship abuse, and revenge) and my no...

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