All Comments on 'Alison's Day Off'

I like... I do like the tales that pattern life and daily activities...

Awaiting for next week's experience or Allison may want to engage Reed, earlier than next week....

I wouldn't trust my 16 yr old daughter with this asshat, nevermind my toddlers. And if someone just walked in after knocking? Then they better be cops or I'll be calling them. You don't just walk into anyone's house unannounced. Ever.

I quit reading after that.

are brainless teen mom fuckers.

A winner in the making. This story has perfect ingredients. A college boy stud, Allison opening the door to possibilities of her natural sexuality. How yummy yummy this could turn out. Ronnie/Donnie will never know what hit him. 5*****

I see Allison begin changing her life style. A new hair-do, new, tighter clothes, shorter skirts and shorts, and going out at night, not explaining where she is at.

Once again, don't ya just love asshole who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion? Granted, this one is a little different since posts like this aim are usually aimed to negative comment on the story. However, every once in a while one of these sneaks in. Still, an asshole is an asshole.

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Here’s an idea: Post YOUR thoughts on a story and let others post theirs. Rebuttal is one thing, but trashing others is another.

It's a fantasy story on the internet I wrote over the course of a day. Please have several seats.

Probably should lay off other commentators and stick to how you feel about the story.

And I'm not sure that a really good editor could have saved this mess. Flawed logic, aimless actions and characters that didn't have a redeeming or interesting thing going on.

And what happens if it turns out that her husband isn't having an affair but is lining something up for their anniversary...? like maybe dancing classes.. and Alison ends up pregnant ? Could happen..

The start of this story is incomplete. It doesn't explain why Reed needed a baby sitter or why he again went back to see her. I don't think the author had an Editor look this story over.

George in Omaha.

"i THINK he is having an affair"

Thats right, she THINKS he is having an affair.

So, she decides to nuke the family by turning into a selfish betraying cheating cunt.

Because she THINKS he is having an affair, she fucks a douchebag bareback.

She "wants him to feel the pain"

And when/if she is wrong? Then what?

She is pregnant with douchebag's baby maybe? And she WANTS the husband to feel the pain. So it is either premeditated continual betrayal, or she is going to make sure the husband finds out about her adultery and she has killed the marriage and hurt the children, giving them a broken home.

she THINKS he is having an affair... so better fuck other men and make sure the husband feels the pain without making sure.

What a cunt.

good writing bad telling\ TK U MLJ LV NV

What was the point? She "thinks" her husband may be cheating, so she decided to cheat with a pimply faced college boy.

Can't buy the story line. I can not believe a married woman with kids would automatically jump to the conclusion her husband was cheating without some substantial proof.

It happens. As a teen though young man, I almost only got babysitting gigs if they had multiple boys, violent kids or were desperate for a sitter on short notice. To make sure I got call backs, I always made sure that the kids were safe and happy and the house was much cleaner than when I started. My only self criticism was that, if I had enough time to myself, I'd snoop some.

Way back then my first target was naughty magazines and her used dainties. It wasn't until I discovered private pictures of the parents that my tastes changed. Then as VHS and Beta became more prevalent then things advanced rapidly. It was shocking what normal, conservative seeming people bought and made for themselves. Just like the people I sat for, I looked and acted completely virginal in public. Frankly, most private stuff was too much for me. I'd only skim much of it to know it was there.

When given opportunities like he got, I first believed every word she's say. To cover and attract, I'd consistently act the virgin. During and after, my conscious would trouble me greatly. It wasn't until one time I found a porno in his stash of his wife and I having sex that I knew she was telling lies, and he put her up to it. The night I brought it up was my last night babysitting that home. I learned that night to always play the fresh faced virgin who believed all women and never confronted anyone over it.

I don't know the statistics but for me, most of the time, the cheating wife's husband knew and approved, and often put her up to it. When he didn't know, it was often as passive aggressive revenge for perceived slights.

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When I was a newlywed my wife and I started babysitting infants and twin babies. I'll never forget the first time arriving at a church friend's home to babysit. We were let in by the husband only to see the wife topless and nursing the twins at the same time. The twins were fussy and the mother was overwhelmed and embarrassed. The husband was clearly happy we were seeing his wife topless. After we got the babies from her he kept delaying her from going to get ready to leave by constantly asking her to show us where stuff was before she could retreat the their bedroom.

Don't care for this one at all. Just another nasty, inept attempt at a story.

A quick fast story, written for a one handed read, but quite well written with well described actions.

Why that cheating ... quick what’s her address ?