Alistaire Ch. 06: Bridget

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"Not without me," Bridget snorted. She got up with her tray and only caught their looks at her just before she turned. "What?"

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Thanks for making it all the way to the end! Nothing makes me happier as an author than the simple fact that you chose to do that. As always, I would be thrilled if you rated or favorited this entry, but I want your thoughts and comments on it even more.

Again, if you want to hear more of Alistaire's Adventures, let me know. Suggestions are welcome, too!

Finally, if you liked this tale, please try some of my others as well.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Nice story lines. Nice language and lexical choices. The editing of what is said can be some better. Sentences between quotation marks are sometimes long and complicated and therefore less natural. Often I don't perceive who is speaking and the exact spot in space of the speaker. (Man, 74 yrs, Netherlands)

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Best chapter of the lot, and they were all excellent!

albertaboyalbertaboy8 months ago

Really like this one, well done

PowersworderPowersworder8 months ago

This was an amazing, very entertaining series.

I do have one criticism however...

The reformed geek in charge of a newly minted harem NEVER shares his girls with another guy. All this talk of Ben and Beth is an instant mood-killer.

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If she wants to part ways, and date someone else, that's fine. But anything else is cheating and against the rules. Part of the allure of a harem story, is that the girls are so in lust with the protagonist, they don't have any interest in other guys.

Alistaire is supposed to be Adonis reborn, not a pitiful cuckold.

JimDiamondJimDiamond9 months ago

What did I think of this story? Hummmm...I think it was simply fucking fantastic story telling. I just left it for a while, then came back and read it again, and finally rated it as one of the two or three best that I have read here. It actually took re-reading it to appreciate it. For the author who imagines some such things are just fantasy, I can assure you that it is not. I do remember singing a song to a group of military wives and then being taken home by one to get even with her cheating husband, then after telling her friends, being loaned out to two other members of the "Sisterhood". Right in the middle of which fantasy cum true, and that asshole UNCLE of mine sent me off his fucking little party in South East Asia. So such things can and do happen! Thanks for bringing that to mind, and doing it so well.

PurplefizzPurplefizz10 months ago

Ridiculously, hilariously good! Although for some reason I can’t visualise Alastair as anyone other than Five from Umbrella Academy, despite it being wildly inappropriate based on Five apparent age and size. Solid gold 5⭐️ stuff, thanks, Ppfzz.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG10 months ago

This is a great series...and I am looking forward to Alistair Too...on with the reading!!

Five Stars...especially with Bridget being a virgin, picking Al to be her first!! He has really been making an impression on the women...Good On Him!!

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Prowler39Prowler3912 months ago

Definitely worth a 5 but please find an editor/proofreader.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So I started with Reputation which was great then I sent into Acting 101 which was even better and now just read Alistaire the sex god and you have reached even higher levels of brilliance with your writing. I'm just loving these stories and wish you had written about 700. I'm so looking forward to what comes next and am so happy I found your gems of entertaining writing. More more more please. BardnotBard

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