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Click here"Not without me," Bridget snorted. She got up with her tray and only caught their looks at her just before she turned. "What?"
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Thanks for making it all the way to the end! Nothing makes me happier as an author than the simple fact that you chose to do that. As always, I would be thrilled if you rated or favorited this entry, but I want your thoughts and comments on it even more.
Again, if you want to hear more of Alistaire's Adventures, let me know. Suggestions are welcome, too!
Finally, if you liked this tale, please try some of my others as well.
Nice story lines. Nice language and lexical choices. The editing of what is said can be some better. Sentences between quotation marks are sometimes long and complicated and therefore less natural. Often I don't perceive who is speaking and the exact spot in space of the speaker. (Man, 74 yrs, Netherlands)
This was an amazing, very entertaining series.
I do have one criticism however...
The reformed geek in charge of a newly minted harem NEVER shares his girls with another guy. All this talk of Ben and Beth is an instant mood-killer.
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If she wants to part ways, and date someone else, that's fine. But anything else is cheating and against the rules. Part of the allure of a harem story, is that the girls are so in lust with the protagonist, they don't have any interest in other guys.
Alistaire is supposed to be Adonis reborn, not a pitiful cuckold.