All Comments on 'Alkansya'

by RiverMaya

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Bebop3Bebop3over 3 years ago

Truly a lovely story,

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

*wiping away some tears* No word wonderful enough to describe this beauty.

Your best!

Thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

*wiping away some tears* No word wonderful enough to describe this beauty.

Your best!

Thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 3 years ago

Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

MsCherylTerraMsCherylTerraover 3 years ago

I love the fairytale-esque quality of your writing. You say so much in a short story and it's truly amazing. Great job!

GinloverGinloverover 3 years ago

Such a beautiful story and shows the love of christmas. The alkansya was magic

PickFictionPickFictionover 3 years ago
A fascinating story

Beautifully told and written. A true Christmas story of caring and selflessness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful story

An unexplained onset of allergies must have inflicted me to make my eyes water.

A beautiful story.

Thank you.

-DK

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

What a Christmas present!

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Lector77Lector77over 3 years ago
Thank you.

Your writing is...filigrana delicada.

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Beautiful

There is no other word for the story, except "beautiful". Thank you for sharing another of your writings with us.

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

A lovely story, thanks for crafting and sharing.

RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years agoAuthor
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You are all so kind. Many, many thanks ♡ and Merry Christmas! 🎄

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Beautiful Story🎅🎅🎅🎅🎅

Thanks for sharing.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderover 2 years ago

I loved that! It was wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very, very well told. This story displays the ability of a mythmaker.

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1