by angienero
I just don't get it, why are you holding back, you must have something to say, what is it. Come on, don't be shy!
I ... disagree. Yes, the story is too short for a quick 'fap', but it IS arousing. It is a quickie [pun intended] vignette about two adults at play, and at play sexually.
I love the seduction; I could emotionally feel and physically see it happening. I could sense the fulfilled, hopeful plan [a teddy under jeans and shirt? ready for action!], and the knowledgeable acceptance of the personality of the other.
I was going to read and leave, but the 'NW!' comment caught my eye and made me got back for a re-read. I'm glad I did, and I voted '5'.