All Comments on 'All Ashore Ch. 02'

VERY hot! Well written, with good insights into the people. Class A+ material.

can't wait to read the continuing adventures...

It seems like you have mastered the art of good pacing. I don't feel rushed from one sex to the next, the story still has flow, and most importantly, Tara still feels like a real person experiencing real thrills... which is of course the most 'thrilling' part for me at least :)

Sooo naughty but soooo nice hope somewhere you get the thanks for the pleasure you give.