All Comments on 'All Bets Are Off (Pt. 01)'

Loved everything about it, hope more is coming.

Really hot, hope you continue.

Very good story and well written You have left in several silly typos that spoil the flow. I’d guess you dictated this. A writer as good as you wouldn’t put “in” when they mean “and”.

Really good debut chapter and story ! Hope we'll see more of this in the future !

What Rpierz said!

I got as far as “looking down I verified “ before I was wetting myself laughing. It’s smut kid, you don’t need to use every word in your thesaurus.

Fantastic!

Good first story. There is lots of room for more chapters. Looking forward to them.

Yeah, there is a cleaned up version of this preparing to be published. I am lazy.

This story is a solid “A”, close to “A+”. This plotline is usually done so similarly or poorly that once you’ve read a bunch, it takes a lot to stand out and make a follow-worthy piece of work. But you have done it! I RARELY post, but this story just made my week so much nicer!

This really made my day. Thanks for the story!

The story good, the writing better, the detail exquisite.

You have the talent to write professionally, if you aren't. Imaginative, thoughtful, witty. Well done