All Comments on 'All Caged Up Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved the story line

Looking forward to the next chapter

FailedscoutFailedscout8 months ago

A great story so far but a bit rough and scattered in the writing.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hope there will be more, just hate great starters and then nothing..

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I wanted to like this, but the writing is very juvenile....sorry

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Well, still too short and please finish the episode instead of cutting it off. The first three chapters could have been a good first chapter. Not sure what is journey to Freedom is supposed to be. Are you sure it is not Femdom?

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