All Comments on 'All He Had to Give'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow. Too bad we can only give 1s and not 0s. Truly awful.

Dewey Cheatham

GinafrommaineGinafrommaineabout 2 years ago

This really sucked. Sucked that he played with her as she slept. Sucked that she was so cold toward him. disregarding the fact that he had single-handedly raised her and gave her everything she needed / wanted.

OnvisyOnvisyabout 2 years agoAuthor

Can you elaborate Dewey?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was grim reading, the worst I've seen here in a while.

OnvisyOnvisyabout 2 years agoAuthor

As the author, I agree that everything depicted in the story is grim and sucks a great deal.

OnvisyOnvisyabout 2 years agoAuthor

For those who have written so far, I wanted to make sure, did you check the story codes before reading my story? I think it is always very important to be sure the codes match what you would like out of a story. I think you would have been spared reading this story, for example, if you had used the codes I gave this story to filter it out of your reading list: humiliation denial kicking bored sex reluctant forced cunnilingus daughter domme daddy sub

Lee364Lee364about 2 years ago

Truly disgusting. Rape is NEVER cool !!!

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