All Comments on 'All Horror's Eve'

by Jenny_Jackson

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Austin8Austin8over 14 years ago
Aye! perfect Halloween tale

Perfect JJ good luck in the contest!

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 14 years ago
Very good job

Jenny. This had the makings of a great story with the horror and the dark and foreboding ending. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HUH?

Thsi should have been labeled as non-erotic instead of erotic horror. Where was the eroticism?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Arrrr me bucko!

but shiver me timbers lass, WTF was that all about?

Bianca_SommerlandBianca_Sommerlandover 14 years ago
Wow!

The imagery was awesome Jenny. That was really creepy. Just a tip, the italics are <I> </I>...I had the same problem with them ;)

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Creepy

Glad to see you back to writing. A very creepy story.

DG HearDG Hearover 14 years ago
Loved it!

Jenny, That was one good horror story. The language you wrote made me feel I was in the inn listening to them talk. During the fighting and burning, I couldn't help but think of 'Night of the living dead'. Very well written and a well deserved 5

With respect

DG Hear

TE999TE999over 14 years ago
Good one, Jenny!

A cracking good little horror tale. Your use of dialect and mood setting are excellent. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great job!!!!

That was awesome JJ! I really enjoyed the visualizations from this story. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I see dead people

Jenny Jackson, this wasn't what I expected. No swearing or tittie exposure or flipping the bird. Just a great old-fashioned horror tale. Very well told...and scary! Great job and best of luck in the contest.

Old_BlueOld_Blueover 14 years ago
I Loved it.

Not at all what I expected, No Hippo's - The story was very, very well done. My best wishes to you in the contest.

Tx Tall TalesTx Tall Talesover 14 years ago
Excellent!

Absolutely compelling. Well told, well written. Good luck.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 14 years ago
Great Story

Loved the horror!

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 14 years ago
Wicked tale!

This is very good. I love the build up and the climax. Very well done lass!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very creepy

Reminds me of 'The wicker Man'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Ooohhhhh.... scarryyyyy!

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