All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas'

Nicely written, very sweet story. Opening it with the letter was a good touch, but I would have liked to know what went on between Mark and Gin before then, to bring her to that moment. And Brits drinking coffee??? The dirty talk during lovemaking was also a bit surprising, not what I was expecting from the female character, but I guess in the heat of the moment, it fits.

full of love and compassion. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Nice job, SBS. Good luck in the contest.

Gen is spending a lonely sad evening at home when her lover she has only just written appears. The sweetness of their coming together is captivating and lends to the appeal of this sweet Christmas tale. Well Written! Enjoyable Read!

They're off to a good start. Maybe next Christmas they will have a little one that Santa can visit?