All Comments on 'All It Takes is a Change (750 Words)'

Well written, tough challenge to build a scenario that effectively in so few words. Well done.

Perfect, paints a very hot picture. I’d love to hear her whining and and muttering O GOD as she feels the stiff black cock sliding into her again.

A great short read. I absolutely loved it.

Fifth....please dont waste your time and talent on the 750 word challenge...its the stupidest concept I've ever heard of. No matter how good the stories are (and this one is good), they ALL come across as unfinished.......

Wow. The best dynamic in sex, first of all. So starting off on the right foot. Fantastic characterization for such a short story. I don't imagine you'll return to either expand on this one (prequel?) or continue it, but it's strong enough that I'm left wanting more.

Another 750 words please...

Well done Fifth. You effectively told the story to match your title. Would love to read a more detailed read to this one giving all the details to this couples decision and how they go about picking their bulls. Then get all the juicy details of that first time until you picked up the bedroom scene. Just route their journey into this new life while managing to be a couple with kids outside this new change. Some acknowledged activities to family and/or friends would be interesting too. Can’t wait to get more things from you in 2023. Welcome back.

Great story!

Hoping both hubby and wife get STD's and spare the world of their idiotic nonsense. Beyond stupid!

This is the ultimate prize for submitting pure racist, cuck shit in just 750 words. Nothing redeeming in this trash. You are so much better than this, Fifth.

What a crock of shit. Good way to lose your license as a therapist though.

The answer is no one can write a great story in 750 words. Period!

glad to see your still alive hope this tease means you may write more stories Abby is still my all time favorite character

We want warden! We want warden!

Awww, do all the little guilt-ridden cucks feel better about themselves for down-voting a story that made them cum?

They bead off to incest, taboo and all kinds of pervy stuff, but this is a bridge too far? ROFL!

Perfect start to a good story!

Amazing story, in such a short format, that isn't easy to paint a complete picture. And you did it, and made us crave to read more. Which kind of path will their marriage take? What kind of twisted relationship will emerge from this event? Haley is obviously on the way to get irriversible blacked. Once you go black, there is no going back. I wonder what kind of humiliating depravity, she is willing to undergo, to get access to the black cocks of her boys. Will she ever let the cock of her husband near her pussy?

Stupid.

Very nice set up. I don't understand the complaints about the length or the 750 word project. Has no one ever read a book flap to see if the story is something they would want to invest their time reading? I would definitely like to spend more time on this story and I hope you will too.

You missed the point. At the end of the weekend, he gets to shoot the niggers and torture wifey to death.

Not my cup of....................well whatever that was about.

Somehow I missed this offering, glad I read about it in your profile. Looking forward to you continuing your other series.

One star for not warned it was wimpy cuckold story

Geez... is just a short story. Well done. Lots of opportunity for the back story...etc.

Just more racist trash. Stupid and ugly.

I can imagine being on the couch as the start working on her. How dominant and rough they are. Hearing her crying out and moaning” please wait, no more PLEASE” then hearing them laughing as she quivers and cums so hard they have to hold her up.

I gave this the highest rating because it was well written but the domination aspect ruined the story for me. Now I have to check the category it is listed under to see if I wasn't paying attention after reading another story by this author.

i agree with the Anon from back in March of 2023 that a wimp warning needed to be added. Many husbands would like to see their wives enjoying a good hard fuck from two black bulls but if they treated the husband like this I think there might be blood shed before the end of the session.