All Comments on 'All My Fault'

Wife woke up to see the truth in time. I wonder if she ever told her Father the truth? Or if the sisters ever figured it out? Great story until the end. Sorry for your loss.

Good read. 5*! Lost my youngest son in 2011. My sympathy for you and yours.

It's true. Sometimes love does conquer.

I'm sorry for your loss.

love trumps greed. lovely story. sorry for your loss. I can relate, Wife and I have lost too many folks in the last 10 years, but thank the Lord not a child or grandchild

so the wife is telling her idiot dumd fuck husband about how no longer believes in THE PLAN... How really does love him...

Which is why she grabs his cock and the sexually mutilate him UNLESS he accepts everything she has to say at face value!!!!!

WHY??? as in WHY after hearing all this does accept her story at face value?

Why? As in WHY doesnt this idiot realize that if his wife had talked to the sister WOULD BE OUT THE DOOR. ?

WHY does it not occur to him that the ENTIRE premise of the marriage was a fraud and a lie?

what does it say about the wife to see that her own a good father that she claims to LOOOOOOVE so much... who is emotionally broken and lost. .. But wont tell her father he truth

Love is at the apex of any relationship especially a happy marriage. Sometimes people plan and scheme until they open their eyes to what is at their surroundings. This story shows how a scheme is transformed to a loving relationship by a schematic mg who learns a life lesson from her sister. Her sister's loss of love was an awakening of sorts to the tragedy of life's bad decisions. Planning based on a bitter mother's advice is not seeded for happiness but materialistic gains. The plan with new awareness is viewed based on what it is in reality as opposed to a view through a clouded lenses frothed with bitterness. Life's disappointments can make a person change. We've all seen it. Sometimes in our own families or perhaps a coworker or acquaintance. Whatever! At anyrate, this story was well illustrated and masterfully presented by a very talented writing genius. The sensitivity and human interaction of the characters was magnificent. The dedication of this story was noted by this reader and it shows why this author was duly motivated in his sensitivities. Thank you and please continue writing since you are really really great.

A very heart touching story, my sympathies to you for your loss. Saratu

nothing good to say, no logical reason to believe wife at any point, guns loaded pointed at his head and he asks why?..okay all is forgiven i wont pull the trigger for money... and he stayed..what colors are the sky in your world, lala happy land

Might willing to give her a chance to prove she was serious about abandoning the plan if she signed one that included the full explanation she had just given and an agreement to walk away with nothing in the event of a breakup.

Sorry for the tardy response I just discovered Literotica.

My cocdolences for the loss of your daughter.

I'm a recovering asshole - a retired lawyer. As most of you know, lawyers have no hearts - we are the hired guns of modern society. We differ from the mafiosi and the Yazuka and others of their ilk in that what we do is "legal"', albeit heartless. Our entire training and practice is to divest ourselves of any and all emotions.

This story touched my heartstrings ( hidden deeply within for many, many years). I've been maaried for forty two years in what has been essentially a loveless "roommate" relationship for the last thirty or so. I fully followed my profession's "no emotions" mantra for the years of my maariage, banishing love from the maariage, i I wish that when the time comes for me or my wife to go, we could have the deathbed scene the author depicts. I'm virtually certain it's not going to happen -- too many hurts to each other over too many years. But this story shows it could happen if I try hard enough.

Bravo! Five stars.

For Tracy - Requiescat in Pace.

This is an interesting story. For the longest time I was thinking about the inevitably sad ending, but you managed to turn it around. I must admit to being pleasantly surprised by that.

Blessings

I'll take you out for a Swartz's Smokemeat if your ever up here

You had to be someone very special to leave such a legacy and provoke such an endearing story of love.

Vulcez, thank you for being her voice!

A truly wonderful loving story, a very fitting tribute to your daughter. Well done. *5

I know where you're coming from. Sorry. Been there and don't want to do it again. Cheers!

This story reminds me a little of the Sisterhood stories. Makes for a good romantic flash story. Five stars in my opinion.

On its face very warm and touching and well done. 5* BUT it would have been equally good if he had divorced her because she had destroyed the trust in their marriage. Despite her statements how can you be certain that she won't change her mind and succumb to the pressure of her mother and sister?

and it is all your fault.

thank you

One of the best here...

First my deep condolences on the loss of your daughter, no words can express the loss of a child.

The story is uplifting the nay sayers always look to the negative, but this was a story of love and commitment. That love can over come outside influences and bear fruit and blossom the way we all wish it would.

Thank you for writing it.

Very, very sweet.

Thank you!

its up to each to define. TK U MLJ LV NV

I don't mind the overall conclusion, but the rate in which his resolve crumbled after his wife told him her plan to him just going 'forget about it' happened way to fast. There should have been more emotion on his part

cried my heart out.

o , to have a love so deep .

a wife of 62 years .. so death at 80+ after a life so well lived & shared with a family with such an abiding love

Godbless & be well

i lost my mom to cancer after her 9 year battle with it .

breast cancer, followed by lymph node cancer in the neck , followed by brain cancer, followed by a return of the brain cancer & suffering from t.i.a / mini strokes .& heart problems .

she left behind a loving husband of 43 years , & 3 children & 2 grandchildren

i struggle to talk to my brother or my sister now,

i can hardly stand to be in the same room as my father ( 67 with heart disease & hbp)

it's 3 years since she passed away & every day i hate us, because we could/should have done more to show her how much we loved her , and made the remaining sands in our hourglass with her count for more .

the pain never stops.

i will never forgive myself.

i will never forgive them.

In my opinion The Plan is little different than what guys do or seek to do every day- pump and dump.

...when a guy does a "pump and dump," he doesn't take half of your money, half of your stuff, and five years of your life with him! I'm not defending the one night stand lifestyle, but it's not as emotionally devastating as a five year no reason out-of-the-blue dump would be, either. (I'm not saying that it's not devastating, just not AS devastating.).

I am without my soulmate and have two teenagers to raise alone. To old now to find a third. No one ever said life is fair only that it is. Good story of what really is dysfunctional marriages in these times.

What a beautifull Story!

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. Katey was able to discover the true "motives" behind her mother's "Plan". She didn't succumb to her mother's devious ideas and lived a full and rewarding life together. Truly as story about a life "well lived".

Made me cry, wonderful story

fuck the cunt, when females die, a man in hell goes up to heaven, and she takes his spot. I mean really.

I can't begin to imagine what must have been done to you by some woman. It must have been horrific to inspire such a hateful comment. I am happy to assure you that there is hope. In spite of your blanket condemnation of all women; I know for a fact, that you are incorrect. I believe in God because of the direct conduit I had to His love through my Mother. Thanks to her, I knew what was possible, that beauty is not just skin deep, and found my own soulmate by looking deeper than most young men knew to look. I must caution you though that this is not a one way street by any means. If you cannot be her conduit to God's Love, then there is no way you can reciprocate her love for you, and you, not her will have condemned your marriage. I can tell you this, hate like evil is a choice we make when we reject God's Love. I'll pray for you but we're here for a reason and ultimately, our choices are our own.

But when she starts her story and grabs the boys it's all over. Any man I know grabs her wrist and removes her grip from the sensitive parts. Rolls over and gets dressed. THEN allows her to finish the story before he throws her out. How could he believe any of the words coming out of her mouth? How could he ever trust her again? He'd be down at the bank, closing accounts and canceling credit cards so fast it'd make her head spin. No - I liked this story right until she announced the plan. Then it derails. He should have divorced her.

I'm sorry for the loss of your daughter. I hope to you find peace.

I like your writing and hope that you can one day continue. Your ideas are excellent and well presented. Take care.

I don't know what to say your writing is so good

The story is so well told and written, i for one hate the cunt, why? because she told him the almost whole truth, your wife tells you she was going to sell your kids and cripple you for life, then changes her mind, and this is romantic or thoughtful ? she did not follow through.....so what, your whole life is a lie now, everything you thought was love was hate and a secret plan to destroy you, no sane man would stay, you might, but the rest of mankind couldn't, so yes hahaha she died, and a cunt like her deserves pain and suffering, why because his life is forever changed..doubt will always be there, kids his? will she leave if we fight, can i trust anyone of her friends with my kids?

but yes you seem like those fucking christian assholes that scream peace love forgiveness at any cost....self respect...self preservation...the limp dick god you pray to....is not mine.....love compassion respect are mine, my god doesn't want me on a cross, been there done that, we are not to sacrifice our lives for someone else...we can if we choose to ,but we are told if we dont we are not evil, not having to is the point, and yes i mock her and most women who have her outlook in today's world, beside the worst villain is a supporting female, females overlook that, so do you, and if i think she is a too bit piece of scum that is wait for it you one brain celled lap dog of morality....my choice, freewill, stop being so sensitive.

any race group or religion(wink) that blow's up to prove a point or physically abuses a woman/men, deserves hell, to me she burnt a cross on his lawn, knocked on his door and " i hate nigger and we was gonna lynch you but i like your car so your safe for now"......thats i what think....oh yeah he feels safe. why?

THIS STORY I HAVE NOT READ FOR A WHILE BUT IT IS NOW IN MY FAVORITES AND WILL BE READ AGAIN. IT IS A VERY LOVING STORY AND IT IS ALL HIS FAULT THAT THEY LOVED EACH OTHER SO MUCH.I BET MOM AND SIS WAS REALLY PISSED WHEN SHE TOLD THEM THAT HER PLAN WAS TO STAY WITH THE MAN SHE LOVED. 5 STARS GREAT STORY. THANK YOU

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Good story. Surprising end. While she held his cock and told him of the plan is when he should have broken her wrist of the hand that held him. That's when it would all end. The end of trust. He would be in doubt forever of her fidelity and honesty. Cheers! C29

the love of my life, my soul mate, finally passed due to cancer after a nine year battle, wihispering, "I am sorry, I love you". She left me with a teenager and a preteen. The sorry referred to leaving me alone without her, she was over twenty years younger than I. and people had worried what would she do when I passed long before her. We had a wonderful live for ten years before she first came down with cancer. God I miss the love of my life. Thank you for your story.

Your story brought tears to my eyes as I lost my best friend and wife of 28 years on 02/02/2014. It seems like last week we were both happy and found out she had 10 months left. My heart is still shattered and I cant see finding love again. All in all I liked your story very much and thank you for bringing back wonderful memories for me

I'm not meaning doing math but rather using the concept of "Given:" and "Assumption:"...

Given: since her mother's daughters all have different fathers, "the Plan" was in effect before she wad born.

Given: her mother would have indoctrinated her in "the Plan" her whole life.

Given: "the Plan" relates to the end game, not the beginning.

Given: she had to feel positive emotions for her husband before she married him so that she could at least STAND to live with him for five years.

Given: she would be required to throw away her positive emotions to follow "the Pan".

Assumption: the positive emotion she felt for her husband when she married him was love.

Assumption: she loved him more than she cared about "the Plan".

Proof: she tells him about "the Plan", thereby allowing him to divorce her without FOLLOWING "the Plan", thereby negating "the Plan".

Proof: SHE intends to stay married to him, thereby negating "the Plan".

If marrying someone without intending to divorce them means next to (if not actually) nothing when you actually DO divorce them... Why isn't it accurate to say marrying someone INTENDING to divorce them means next to (if not actually) nothing when you actually decide NOT to divorce them...?

I liked the premise here... good story...

I should point out though... barring a death grip like hold on a guy's cock getting your cock free isn't really difficult or very painful. OTOH, grabbing (even reasonably lightly) the BALLS... that'll really get you some attention... ouch.

I rarely give 5* to a story...This is one of those few...Thank you for writing it...

Read it again. Just tugs at your heartstrings.

There are a lot of sick, angry women out there. While it is wrong for a man to use a woman for sex under false pretenses, some women use men for marriage, and a source of income through spousal maintenance and child support! I have met more than a few that actually admitted that they never loved their ex husbands, they married for money with the knowledge that if things went bad, they'd get a nice pay off. Of course, this strategy works best if there is a lot of money involved, but they will also take a middle class man and bleed him dry for child support. There are many ways to betray your marriage vows other than cheating.

As a man I am happy true love overcame the "plan". Unfortunately the plan was something I had to live with. Too many women in real life do scheme to get themselves to a better position and make a profit on people emotions. If this was a true story all I can say is I an envious and happy for them at the same time.

Someone called it. Sweet, someone else said. More like Touched, as in; Are you?

I'm going to come to you house, and murder you, while you sleep. Then, I'm going to sell your children into slavery. I've been planning it, for YEARS. Right down to the last details, like wearing gloves, no witnesses, etc. I even have a shallow grave picked out for you!

Oh wait! I just read an article in the paper, about a murderer, and how he went to prison. I don't like how it turned out for him, so I've changed my mind. I won't kill you.

There! NOW you can trust me! Why would you cross the street if we meet? I just told you, I won't kill you, or your kids. Not because you convinced me otherwise, or it's the right thing to do, but simply because I don't like the alternative.

Touching, isn't it? Sweet, aren't I?

What, exactly, was the difference here?

I just read with consternation that you didn't publish anything yet,what a loss ,how can we have culture without your constant sarcasm when storys don't go your way ? i for one would love to read one of your masterpieces full of revenge,murder and other atrocities,keep it up continue your heartfelled comments to our delight ,i'm sure you have a lot of fans and please don't succumb to become a humanitarian

I agree completely. Wife went into the marriage under false pretenses and with malice aforethought. The marriage was a farce and just because she recanted her earlier intentions it does NOT absolve her of her original malicious intent. Indeed, what's to say she won't change her mind yet again when things aren't all perfect and roses? After all, she's just a whore at heart, sleeping with and marrying a man solely for monetary gain.

All the RAAC, bleeding heart, "I'm in touch with my inner femininity" types will of course love this story. I'm sure they're enamored with the "Life Time" channel movies as well.

Morgan DeWolfe

Please accept my condolences.

Hans

I'm convinced my ex wife adopted a similar plan having taken advice from a lesbian friend. After a 20 year relationship where I provided every material benefit she ever asked for and I pandered to her bizarre sexual appetite and I loved her dearly. She changed overnight becoming objectional and uncommunicative. I was planning my retirement as my health was deteriorating and my job ceased to stimulate me - we had planned to build a guesthouse on an exotic island where she owned some land. As this plan was about to take off, my wife changed her mind preferring to serve an intervention of order on me forcing me to leave my house (an extremely simple process that many women in Australia follow). So I had to live without my wife and my emotionally stressed son on a promise we would reunite within a year (when my wife had sorted out her own emotional problems). A year later she served me with divorce papers. After a years separation it was just a matter of filing. She announced she no longer loved me she was seeing someone else. Part of the plan was for my ex wife to keep the house and a large chunk of my superannuation investments. She then applied for child support but my son realised what had happened and he asked to live with me. This is the Plan for a lot of women in Australia who seek to abandon their husbands for another partner and where the crazy divorce laws support this course of action.

She is now renting her home and building her guest house with her lesbian friend financed by my super fund. At least I have my son and the respect of my friends.

@davoo For the next generation men.

1. Secret bank and other deposits before and during the marriage.

2. If it may be in that country before marriage preanuptial.

3. To start any marriage over 35 years old.

4. To marry such woman who wants minimum 2 kids at once after the wedding.

without kids 70% of the women will cheat.

In the USA survays show the 25-30 years old men begin to avoid the marriage active and they say the next.

1. The high wife cheating gives high % bastard kids and only 6 states are in the USA where the ex husbands can start their life without children support for bastards. This generation is afraid from bastards.

2. The husband role is showed in negative view in the media from TV serials to movies from Magazins to websites . Literotica is the part of this media.............

3. The husband role has negative effect on the job career.............

The husband rate decreased in the 25-30 years old men in the USA! Earlier the men tried to avoid the marriage but this was passive and now this became into active.

there are no boundaries, Save One. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nice read a good change from the norm. So So sorry for your loss.

sorry for your loss, Your story brought tears to my eyes as I lost my beautiful wife to cancer in 2014. After 30 years

love on.....for the memories of your daughter---life is bitter sweet, it comes it goes many of us are swept along bruised and batered but we survive----changed yes sometimes for the better some times for the worst..but remember tommorow is another day

pud

I lost my wife to cancer after 39 years together and the hardest thing to do is carry on. Your beautiful story is helpful.

Sorry for your loss.

Having lost two to cancer, I know what your pain is. You have my deepest sympathy for your loss.

That said, thank you for writing such a delightful and uplifting story, one that truly belongs in a category of "Loving Wives". I don't expect to outlive this spouse, which is a reversal of sorts, but I'm trying to keep the same spirit going that is imbued in your story.

On reading the works that you have posted in here, I feel like I would like to know you. Not an attempt to get together, just an expression of admiration for what comes across in your stories.

This story is very good, it make sad, weak, and makes me feel and remember my loss. Excellent

Simple truth here. She committed fraud by marrying him under false pretenses. That's fraud. An annulment and charges of fraud should have been his immediate answer to her "confession". As for her grabbing his penis... a quick vicious punch to her solar plexus would have freed him of that sexual assault without leaving any evidence.

I hate lairs almost as much as hypocrites, she was both!

Just My Opinion, YMMV

Morgan DeWolfe

It's heartwarming to see someone growing up and learning that you have to stand on your own two feet and NOT suffer the sins of those who came before. Her mother's sins are her own - it's just too bad that she infected one of her daughters severely and the other slightly before the third was able to shake the shackles completely.

5/5

Great and touching story. Shame there aren't more like this.

The right thing gets done so seldom, maybe we shouldn't be so negative about why sometimes.

So okay, as 'penance' she has to tell her father the truth.

For extra credit she can help her sister make it up to Kyle, but only after her sister tells her dad.

Wow - a wife that actually loves her husband in spite of the way she was raised. Too bad the second sister couldn't find a way back to the man that she loves. Vulcez: Rest in peace Tracy; sorry for your loss.

Horrible ending. She told him all he needed to know. Get his house in order to give her as little as possible and divorce the bitch.

Nice to read a real loving wife story. Thanks for sharing this with us.

he said to himself with a single tear in his eye

Five star thank you for the wonderful story please keep up with the writing I'm very sorry to hear about your Daughter passing god bless her and I know how hard it is to lose a love one I lost my dad and mom to cancer dad gone four years and mom last year again thank you and god bless

First of all I wanted To send my condolences at your bereavement. I lost my son shortly after his birth so I know the pain that it fills a parent's heart at the loss of a child.

Next of all I want to thank you very much for sharing this story with this. This is a true "loving wife" story. And I only wish that there were more the same. All too often you see here stories of all the weaknesses of humans. It's nice to see one that shows the strengths to which we can aspire.

once again thank you so very much for this story brought a tear to my eye and a bit of warmth to my heart.

With profound regards,

chagrined

For a wonderful story that embraces some of the "stupid stuff" that some people consider normal. I'm saddened that you lost your daughter to cancer.

A beautiful story about two people that loved each other with every breath they took, I enjoyed the story and it is in my favorites I wish there had been something in it about there life and love together instead it jumped way ahead and she was dying of cancer. What will he do without her???

Ron/ cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

i liked it very much so I gave it a five. I'm very sorry for your loss.

Daughter. May God bless you

Thank you for this story. I've just discovered your work and really enjoy it and your style. This is a nice gem. Unfortunately, on a site such as LIT the reader has to wade through mountains of rubbish to find a gem.

Got me crying damn you!

Well done.

just a really good sweet story. thanks for writing it.

jeff oklahoma

I would like to see more stories from you on this site, or in a bookstore.

I do believe I would left the bitch and divorced her when she first started to spout her plan.. The hell with listening to her BS.

Delightful story. Well paced, great take-away line.

I'm encouraged to explore some of your other offerings.

5 stars & favorited.

I thought it was going to go in a different direction but was so glad it didn't. Those of us who are single in our winter years wish we had someone to hold our hand and listen to our last words.

5 stars all the way!

As-soon-as she started telling me her "Exit Strategy", I would of gotten out of bed, dressed, grabbed a couple of suitcases, packed my clothes and things, and told her, "this is my exit strategy bitch!"

Even if the gold digging bitch did have a change of character, it would be damn stupid to tell him about it!

And I don't understand the whole squeezing his nuts shite.

So she causes him slight physical pain at the same time telling him that their marriage was a sham.

Stupid as a sack of Hillarys

If you made this story up you captured a lot my feelings about the loss of a loved one, Knowing there's nothing you can do but, let go.

I was selfish at first for a while and wanted to keep her with me as long as I could.

I saw how much pain she in and at the same her trying it hide from us. I knew we could no longer allow her to suffer quitely in pain trying to protect us.

She fought and stayed with us as long as possible through her pain.

In the end Cancer was too big to overcome and It was better for her not to worry about us and made her feel better that she could go and we would be okay. her pain was too strong and she didn't have to hide her worry about us. We would be able to keep moving forward. I had to let her know she had nothing to worry about and it would okay for her to go.

The next morning after breakfast she gave me a kiss and smiled and stopped breathing.

She was gone and went away with a smile. That same morning when we woke up she was once again was the person I met over thirty years ago.

That was all I needed and that smile will stay with me forever.

But a great dedication.

Over night they've been married sixty+ years? BS story!!

I don't know what's wrong with some people... honestly! If you have any ability to love another person, then you should recognize that this is a wonderful love story, sweet and heart-warming!!!

It's touchingly written and refutes the attitude of unfortunately too many women who view marriage as a way to climb the latter to wealth. Haven't any of you heard the term starter-husband/marriage? This is a touching way to refute that erroneous viewpoint and show that love and happiness are FAR more important then acquiring wealth and riches!!!

I'm a heterosexual male in his mid-50s who still believes in love and romance, even if my own wife gave up on me 18 years ago...

Their married life lapsed and she was dying of cancer. Don't you even have enough imagination to follow a story? What a sad dipshit you are. Twelve years of Special Ed classes didn't help at all, did they?

Don't feel bad if you never write another story this good. It is cream of the crop. I am a diehard anti-reconciliation reader. Yet you got my highest rating. Congratulations!

I would of given her-her wish. Her DIVORCE!

It shows that we are influenced by our surroundings. She woke up and smelled the roses soon enough and opened up to husband. Hopefully during her life the family got to see true love.

I have a bit of mixed emotions. She's very lucky that he has such a deep love for her, otherwise her just HAVING the plan, even if she didn't go through with it, would have caused a lesser man to run off screaming. What if the second sister DIDN'T tell her about her regrets?

And she's been out in the real world for over five years now, and she's only NOW realizing that the world doesn't work that way?

I suppose we have to allow for SOME suspension of disbelief, but this story was written in 2012, therefore they were marries in 1950, this conversation took place in 1955. Her mother's been executing the plan for around 35 years (7 husbands, 5 years each), puts us back to 1920. I don't believe that divorce laws were so liberal then that a woman could just up and divorce her husband and walk away with half the assets.

Except with her hand on my most sensitive areas? With her threatening me with physical harm? The one thing different would have been a hand around her throat as long as she had a hold of my "fishing rod and reel." lol

I am all about equality! :-)

"It's all your damn fault. According to the timetable, 'The Plan' should be in full effect. We should in divorce court right now with me being on my way to a somewhat prosperous single lifestyle. I also should be on the lookout for husband number 2".

Stop Right There! End Of Story. End Of Our Marriage, My Love For You, My Trust In You, My Respect For You.

She lied when she said her marriage vows, she lied for years there after. Does ANYONE really believe they can trust her veracity NOW?

This isn't even RAAC bullshit, it's worse. Just written garbage and it stinks just like that pile of shit she sold the brain dead husband.

As for her "holding" my penis... well a good hard punch in the face would put an end to that shit!

And the touching ending...lame author trying to justify his fantasy. Just More Bullshit!

There was no cheating, and Katey woke up to reality just in time to keep from destroying her marriage and her life.

I read this story several months ago, and it has been well worth the second trip! The ending brought tears to my eyes, as did your dedication to your daughter, Tracy.

Thanks!

Mom's influence in the lives of her daughters with "The Plan" hurt many people and destroyed what other wise would have been happy marriages! Mom should have to pay and pay dearly!

as I recall the short term period is close to four years... and the need to move is present... 4