All Comments on 'All My Fault'

Really nice and well written story.....RIP Tracy.

Another great favorite story. Wow,

Bill S.

A lovely, lovely story. AAAAAA++++++

5 stars -

GEE I am faced with that final stage of life right now - not looking forward to the next 5 years, if I last that long.

Your story kind of blew me away. I understand you, my wife and I just had our 50th anniversary and I couldn’t imagine losing her. We also lost our eldest daughter several years ago to a stroke. Almost destroyed us! …… anyhow, I wish you well. Another Vietnam Vet

Another wonderful story, not really a tear jerker, but well thought out and written. another author to favourite

Firstly allow me to give you my deepest condolences on the loss of your daughter .Secondly thank you for a very enjoyable story .

A true "Loving Wives" story for a change. Thank You for sharing it with us. Condolences on the loss of your daughter. My wife and I have been together for 42 years, and our children are healthy and happy, what more can you ask for. :-) Two years ago I wasn't sure if we'd make it this far, as I had a "widow maker heart attack". But we're still together looking forward to our next anniversary in July.

Oh. My. God. SUCH a perfect little flash story!

Sincerest condolences on the loss of your daughter

Five stars.

This was a sad and uplifting story. A true loving wife.

That confession probably had him in despair until he realized she really loved him too much to let him go.

Just an 'Effn awesome story.

Just re-read it again. Still the best story on Loving Wives, possibly on Literotica. 10 stars, as always. The Bear always approves this one.

The BEAR

Great little vignette. Five stars and favorited.

I'd like to correct my thoughts on the timing. Yes, we can think of this conversation taking place in 2012, when the story was written, so the mother's divorces would have been well before no fault and wives making out like bandits in a divorce (assuming that's true irl and not just LW), but the conversation could be taking place at some time in the future, just as the deathbed scene does, putting her mother's early marriages into a more recent time.

While the story was a good one, seriously everyone is so happy to wet themselves over this, they intentionally ignore that almost every spouse would have some lingering questions and doubts.....as in sleeping in the spare room for a couple days at least.

So yes, it is a shiny happy story with the reality totally removed.

Thanks for a good story. Is it just me or would it take some time to get over the fact that I had married a gold digger and into a family that were so conniving as to look at marriage as to only what they could get out of it. I'm glad it worked out for him but he was lucky. What other horrible attributes did she take from her mother that would come into play in this marriage and what nasty habits would she pass on to her children and grandchildren. I would have to keep my eye on her for a long time after the talk.

Ok, so I'm a sucker for a tearjerker. 5 stars.

A real happy ending...great read thanks

There are very few stories on literotica that I can genuinely give a 5star rating to. I think it's been about 5-7 stories that managed to reach that threshold before I read this one. I'm glad I could give this story 5 as well.

No one should have to bury their child. I am so so very sorry.

This a great story. All the lame little cuck authors should read this and rethink their direction.

Outstanding!!!

Beautiful story and I'm so sorry for your loss .

Its been awhile since i first read this, but i enjoyed it then and i enjoyed it again. Better than weary cuk stories

You make my heart ache.

It feels strange to say it...but thank you.

Wonderful. Fantastic author!

Damn! I hate you. I hate authors that have the ability to make me cry. I cried at the end, while smiling at the same time. You are amazing. Thank you! I really don't hate YOU, I just hate that you have the ability to evoke emotion in me.

You did you daughter proud!

Fantastic, Great, I love the entire story. Thank you

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Very Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Thank you for the emotions this story brought out.

A stunning story.

Excellent story. I've been married 48 years and am living proof it can be done

One of the best stories on this site ...

I've read this a few times and have written a positive review, with definite notes of sadness for the author, I have had 2 back to back siblings pass from the C (18 months apart). So for this I am empathetic to his suffering. That being said , the one thing I cannot get past is the fact the husband did not force her to sign a post-nup. There were years and years of wayyyyyyy to much brainwashing of her just to let it all go and pray she doesn't relapse into that mind set. He needed to protect himself. Yes the ending proved it ultimately wasn't necessary but at the time...... just saying

Wow! Where did this extremely gifted writer go. I've just read three of his works and I'm definitely going to read the rest. Thank you for your great tales.

A true Loving Wife

One of the best stories of all time! Amazing writing!

Such a beautiful story, lots of thought and love put into this.

Good story made me think about life and love

This is a simple story, and yet there is something quite powerful about it. Very well done.

So, she lies to him for however long they dated and for five years of marriage. Then, she grabs his sex organ to keep him under control while she tells him the story. Short of being a total pussy, why would he ever stay with her?

An amazing story. Simple but creative.

O.K., it is without a doubt the best all-time story on Literotica. Also the Bear's favorite. (So I'm a softy. Sue me!) 10 stars because it is worth it. They call this "Loving Wives" for a reason. As always, the Bear approves. Thanks for writing it, again. I needed a pick-me-up due to the Christmas blahhs.

The BEAR

Superb.

Crazy good story.

5 stars

5 stars. And so, so sorry about your Tracy...

I have read and reread this story. It really is one of the best that I have read. It begs a second story where her mom gets her just deserts, but the basic story is flawless in my eyes. Well done

Great story. Sorry for the loss of your daughter.

Excellent! 5 stars, sorry for your loss. DD

Very nice. Well ended unlike so many stories on Literotica

Beautiful story.

5💥💥💥💥💥

Excellent slice of a wonderful life.

Sad, but sweet.

Wow. Just… wow. This guy can write.

Love this one x

Lovely Story.

My daughter died of cancer in May of 2011. She was only 49. I shared your pain and experience at the same time.

Merlin

Wish you were still writing!

5

Sorry for your loss.

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A wonderful story, deserving of way more that five stars, although five stars say that"I love it.". Powerful.

JPB

Very sorry to hear about your daughter. The story is a true tribute to true love.

Cute y cruel

6 stars

Awesome story. Thanks

It amazes me how a few people can write this well, and how there can be so many people out there who just write complete trash and think they're doing something like this. I'd like to see a writers like this form another website that can be done without the r and x-rated material, that could be shared with young adults in high school kids well so they learn these lessons early. Leaving out the explicit parts would make the value of this go up so much for many people, and for our society. Any leaders out there willing to start something uplifting and beneficial to our world?

The dedication is too sad, so very sorry for your loss.

Lamento mucho lo que sufrió tú hija

Mis condolencias

Your dedication at the end of you story has me bawling like a baby. I can’t imagine the heart break and sorrow of losing a child. I hope I never find out.

Thank you for a wonderful heart felt story of how true love matters the most!

wonderful story and heartwrenching dedication. I can't imagine what you went through.

Great story but could have done without the jumping to her dying. LM

Thank you for sharing your talent and your bravery. Your dedication is so moving and eloquent. I can't imagine what you and your family have gone through. Again thank you. BardnotBard.

I love it

I'm sorry to hear about your daughter .The story made me mad and cry , it was wonderful

Wishing you long life and fond memories of Tracy.

Aw c'mON! You forgot one imp thing in the jump in time ... you forgot to account für where Cheryl and Kyle got off in the converging stories of their lives...

whether Katey and hubby (Vulcez?) helped Cheryl's reunion attempts... and did it result in unintended consequences such as sb involved dying?

I’m sorry your daughter died.

Like others have said, this is the best story ever published in "Loving Wives', and in Literotica. Again, 10 stars, because I can't count, and it's worth it. This is at least the sixth time I've read it as I go back to it when I'm feeling blue. My wife of 53 years is suffering from the blues and depression from a stroke years ago. I don't want to think of the future, but the past was fan-fucking-tastic. 5 children, 10 grandkids, and more love than this Viet Vet deserves. God bless you, son. Welcome home and I'm sure your daughter is smiling down at you. Sorry you aren't writing any more. The Bear approves.

The BEAR

Lost My wife of 35 years to cancer in August of 2011. The real sad part is there will never be a cure, not from this Country (US) anyway. Too much money for the drug companies to loose. Some treatments in Mexico show promise. Great story, Hit Home.

The big 'C' is the most evil thing on earth. Great story, sad ending, sadder still to learn of your daughter

If The Bear can give it ten stars I wish to the same.

Sorry to hear of your loss. Great story

Just so much emotion packed into this one page story. My wife of 52 years beat breast cancer, but I'm sure it contributed to her failing health in later life, that and the unknown problems with childhood polio that later revealed itself in adulthood. Happy that Katey came to her senses before harm was done to the marriage. Five stars.

Great story. D

Wow, just wow, 5 stars. This story has it all. Thank you for taking the time to share this powerful story, I was enraged at the beginning of this story as Katey started talking about "the Plan" and in the end them staying together and living a loving life together and her saying on her death bed that "she had a wonderful life" I could almost see the love that they had for each other, meh, maybe I'm just a softy, but this story touched me, thank you for that.

Best wishes to you and yours.

i started crying at the end when the author said he lost his daughter to cancer . i also lost my daughter to breast cancer in january 2015 she had just turned 30 in sept .

This was such a strange story and yet it still struck me hard emotionally. The ending was sweet but that really got the tears pouring. 5⭐️+. Thank you for sharing this story and I am very sorry about you losing your daughter.

This story is pure genius. The author starts the story by making us hate this loathsome woman, but by the end we're all weeping because we love her. Nice job.

I'm truly and sincerely sorry about your daughter

great story

Damn you it's all your fault for making my eyes start to sweat

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My eyes began to water. "It's all your fault, you know." That was not part of "The Plan".

Seriously though, the mother with this plan is terribly damaged, not only to implement such a cold and hurtful plan, but to also encourage her daughters to do the same thing. Of course they're not really any better for going along with it. It seems he got lucky and found the one that saw sense in the stupidity and heartlessness of it. But to think that shit like this could be a thing... scary stuff. Imagine one day your wife randomly up and leaving because she's following some cockamamie plan that she told you nothing about the whole time you were together. Nightmare fuel for me really.

Different, a good quick read. thank you 5*

Not sure how many times I have read this. Great heartwarming story. However he still needs to have serious discussion concerning her ability to plan his dismissal for at least the majority of the five years of their marriage. Good they got it together. Thanks for sharing. John

Once again it warms the cockles of my heart. Delightful. Hate to disagree with Btrying2, but in my book nothing more need be said.

Loved the story. It brought tears to my eyes at the end. Thank you. I have a friend who kind of went on a reverse Plan she married 4semi wealthy and wealthy men then managed to reduce their wealth and the get a divorce when they were broke.

Great Story.. my condolences for your loss .

Oh I have probably read this ten times and it gets me every time. That or my office is dusty. One of the all time great stories on the site.

A wonderful short story.