All That Glitters Ch. 27

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"That is a standing order from this company," Annette Liramor assured her. "Once we realized that your sacred resting place was in continuous use, we immediately set orders that such sites should not be disturbed. We have identified five such sites, only one resting place, but four places with buildings that were once on the surface of the planet. Those sites are protected from mining exploitation."

"Our people will be happy to know that," the Speaker spoke with a nod to her. "Your orders?" he asked, noting her title earlier.

"Yes, they were," Annette informed him. "Mine and those of Dir. Fiona Marsh at Liramor-23."

The gave Annette a small bow in acknowledgement.

After a prolonged silence Raymond slid in with a comment. "I do not wish to interfere with this meeting, however, there is much on our agenda and our voyage must continue."

President Lapierre stood and extended a hand. "This is a common greeting amongst our people," he said as he gripped the Speaker's hand. "It started as a means of expressing peace, as most of our people are right handed and, if you greet another with your right hand, you cannot hold a weapon in it," he finished with a smile.

The Speaker smiled back, in the manner of his kind, gripping the hand firmly, as the President was doing.

The small group was quickly returned to the Marie Saitent and the vessel swiftly leaped into space. They quickly moved through several different planets, each distinctive in one way or another, though they did not stop again until they arrived at Planet Hanover. The planet had many more naval ships in orbit than had other planets.

The ship moved down to the Citadel and Navy HQ, where they were greeted by several senior navy personnel. The Speaker noted the presence of several of the small ships with and without guns.

"Mind-Hur, Speaker, may I present Field Admiral Charles Thenton, commander of Sector Forty-Two and his staff," Raymond explained. There were a lot of military personnel present all dressed in black uniforms that were different than they had seen earlier.

Formal dress? Mind-Hur wondered.

"I am pleased to greet the first members of your species on this planet," Thenton spoke formally with the pair. "It is our wish that our continued relationship with your people will be one of peace and not one of war. However, should you wish to conduct war on our people, this HQ will likely be the one to direct our war against your people."

The Admiral spoke with them briefly before giving Raymond a signal to take them back abord his little ship.

"Why did you bring us here?" asked Mind-Hur.

"I wanted you to see the man who would likely wage war against your people," Raymond told them. "You can see his resolve for peace but I assure you his resolve for war is just as strong."

They next found themselves back on board Liramor-23 and back in the embassy. Once again, the presence of the Junelliea made them relax and wish for peace. It was later in the day and a feast was on the table before them.

Mind-Hur waved a scanner over the offerings and found they were not poisonous to her kind. She tentatively took small bites of various fruits, vegetables and other edibles, finding some to her liking and others not so.

Fiona Marsh asked if they would be willing to provide an interview about their adventure in Union space. Another Rai approached them and sat down opposite them when the pair agreed.

Tall and slim, the Rai was a study in contrast. She was dressed in a fashion that they were not familiar with but did not look that strange. She had a small silver object floating around her head, and she wore some kind of device over her eyes, a small red dot prominent between her eyes.

"This is Cynthia Steward," Fiona began. "She is a reporter, likely a position that you are not familiar with as your news briefings do not seem to be conducted by professionals. Cynthia is a professional news reporter, whose specialty is finding newsworthy articles and conducting insightful interviews with the people involved."

"Good day, viewers," the strange Rai began. "This is Cynthia Stewart reporting from Liramor-23 with two of the species that were discovered in this system several years ago. They refer to themselves as the Pod-Drran. They have had a momentous day travelling through Union space to get an idea of how large we are and seeing some of our planets for themselves.

"Hello, Mind-Hur and Speaker," Cynthia began in a voice that was carefully enunciated. "It is a great pleasure to make your acquaintance today after such a significant trip for the both of you," she said with one of the smiles that would normally have caused them to be frightened.

"Do you always smile in this manner?" Mind-Hur asked. "To us, an open-mouth smile, displaying teeth as you do is a threat for our people."

"This is the normal way that we Humans smile, Mind-Hur," Cynthia told the Rai. "We mean no ill will by it. If it makes you more comfortable, I will try to keep my mouth closed when I smile to you.

"I would like to ask both of you several questions about your day, if you will consent to answer them?" Cynthia asked.

"You may ask you questions but we will only answer those questions that we feel comfortable answering," the Speaker replied.

"Fair enough, Speaker. I can accept that. First, this was an amazing trip for you. According to Raymond Clark, you saw eighteen different planets today, and explored two of them, plus this platform. You travelled a distance of over 450 light years or 513 of your solar cycles. Yet you have not finished your travels as you must now return to your point of origin, the Fleet Shem.

"How do you feel, Speaker, about your travels today?" Cynthia asked the Speaker first, aware that he was the more reticent of the pair.

"We travelled that distance today?" the Speaker asked, obviously shocked.

"We did," Raymond answered the question for the Speaker.

"I am greatly surprised that we covered such a distance. Yet we only saw eighteen worlds," the Speaker said.

"Not so surprising," Cynthia said. "There are forty-eight member worlds in the Union, to visit all of them would take three days of travel. Visiting eighteen in a single day is significant. Especially the list that you have purportedly visited. You have seen many of our more significant planets, including Liramor Prime and Planet Hanover.

"Was your trip comfortable? I understand there are differences between our sciences and technologies," Cynthia stated with a closed-mouth smile.

"Yes, I would say the trip was comfortable," the Speaker joked. "I was surprised that the gravity on the small ships did not shift when we made our jumps, this made for a very comfortable voyage as our artificial gravity is not as steady as yours appears to be."

"Perhaps, had we had the opportunity to continuously devote ourselves to science, as your people seem to have," Mind-Hur quickly interjected. "However, our people have been at war with each other almost since we set foot on our new home world." And here Mind-Hur gave the Speaker a significant look.

"How long have your people been in space," Mind-Hur asked.

"We have only been in space for 400 of our years, 456 solar rotations in your terms, and only have been using our current FTL drives for 126 of our years, 143 of your years. Most of the planets that you have visited today have been colonized within that time period.

That information shocked Mind-Hur and the Speaker. The look they had on their faces was easy to understand by the humans despite the difference in facial musculature.

"You have made this much progress in this short of time?" the Speaker asked.

"Before that, our species was planet bound on Terra," Cynthia explained. "Our species as a whole has only been civilized by current standards for a little over 600 years. Prior to that, we had no real understanding of the sciences needed to produce the materials necessary to build the large cities you saw on the worlds you visited.

"Our metal age has only been around for approximately 5,700 years, prior to that we used wood and stone tools. We have progressed significantly in the last 600 years.

"Like you, we were plagued by internal wars but swiftly found a way beyond that to allow ourselves to develop as a people," Cynthia explained.

"How did you manage that?" the Speaker asked.

"We relegated the Warrior Class to a subordinate position," Cynthia explained. "Prior to that time, our Warrior Class had too much power and often went to war without the consent of the people who suffered greatly from such activities.

"Fortunately for us, those wars tended to be smallish in nature, though they still caused considerable damage to the land and to society. Once the Warrior Class became subordinate to the political class and the political class became subordinate to the will of the people as a whole, things changed swiftly for us."

Mind-Hur and the Speaker again shared a significant look with each other.

Cynthia asked them many questions about their people, their society, the voyage they had made through Union space. She had no idea of how much a simple statement she made would change a society...

End of chapter twenty-seven.

Much of the information on empathic ability found in the First Congress, comes from a source called 'Code' which can be found at life coach code on the web. This group explores the super-norm of humanity including empathy. My thoughts are dispersed within their ideas on empathy, tied together to enhance the experience in the story. Since I borrowed from them, it is only right that they should be acknowledged.

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firehorseukfirehorseukabout 1 year ago

R A I N B O W!!!

Needs more description - Surely not a rainbow appearing in the room.

So what exactly do you mean?

Are there rainbow lights sparkling in the room

A rainbow aura around her that other people can see

A rainbow 'feeling' around her

A rainbow wave travelling out from her people can see

Can you see the rainbow on the machines?

Can you see or feel the rainbow only if you are an empath?

Do non-empaths see or feel the rainbow?

What?

firehorseukfirehorseukabout 1 year ago

"This will give us the opportunity to be on their ships, to watch, listen, and learn about our enemy."

Sorry - this message is being conveyed, unencrypted (doesn't say its encrypted) from the home world to Fleet Shem via the enemy message probe! You need to say it was encrypted in their top secret unbreakable code otherwise it really doesn't make sense to convey a message about an enemy that they can openly read!

pk2curiouspk2curiousalmost 2 years ago

WOW ! Terrific chapter .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Thanks for a great story. Hope to see lots more soon.

prsstaridprsstaridover 3 years ago
Thanks for the response Bigtddybr

Thanks for clearing that up. I was not positive it was a cosmic calamity or some alien threat that destroyed their original planet.

buddah222buddah222over 3 years ago

Once again awesome as always thanks for the story and keep going please

bigtddybrbigtddybrover 3 years agoAuthor

To Prsstarid: Marat-Zami, the great destroyer is now known as the Piscium 8 gas giant. The planet spiraled inward from the outer solar system until it intersected with the orbital plane of the original Piscium society home world. It's inward spiral was deflected by the destruction of the planet and it wound up staying in its current orbit where it is now. Much of the surface area of the doomed planet was sucked into the gas giant. The people on the planet watched helpless as the gas giant came toward their planet. Knowing their planet was doomed, they held a lottery and got some of the people off their home world. They consisted of the two branches of their society, now referred to as the A and B Society. The ancient pact took the two societies to two different planets with the caveat that they not interfere with each other. That mandate is still in effect, as will be explained more fully in future chapters. Yes, I have already included changes occurring on the slaver planets in the next chapter, so kudos to you for spotting that. I will give an indication of what will happen to the Pod-Drran in ch 28 which should go to the editor shortly. Contact with the B Society will start in future chapters. It will not be an easy encounter but will be less problematical than the contact with the Pod-Drran. Contact with the Insectoids will start once we have a functioning language matrix which is currently ongoing. Wassim Andjuran will also be dealt with in ch 29. So some of the plot is coming full circle. Lots of interesting chapters ahead. I had intended to write only ten chapters, but this storyline was so well received that I readily expanded on that. The inclusion of the pirate attack in ch 7 and Andjuran in ch 8, was a means of providing a reason for adding more chapters. That kind of took the storyline in different directions, not that I am complaining. Hope that is helpful. More detailed information is available in the "Notes" chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another amazing chapter!!!

I always eagerly await the next chapter of this fantastic story. This was one of the best so far. Can’t wait until the next chapter.

prsstaridprsstaridover 3 years ago
Loved this chapter..

I think this was one of the best chapters yet and I think we are nearing the end but there are so many threads to still tie up. I am not sure how you every thought you could do it in 10 chapters or so.

I had completely forgotten about the insectoid's life pod they captured from the earlier chapters. There is the possibility of returning him home and that he attempted to communicate is different languages could possibly mean there are multiple species that are apart of their empire. I could see that as a completely different story arc.

Then there is the aggressive race of the Pod-Drran that needs to be dealt with. I have a feeling the Warrior Class will not give up their power easily. It will be interesting on how you plan to conclude that.

This you have the other faction of the same race of Pod-Drran. They branched a different direction and the two branches ignore each other. I am puzzled as to why the aggressive branch didn't attack the others and make them conform to their way of life. That seems counter to their normal reaction.

Then there are the slaver planets that need to get some justice. Perhaps if the aggressive Pod-Drran Warrior class does not give up control and things continue as the status quo, they can send all the slave owners to them to get a taste of what being a slave is like. After those planets are liberated.

The last thing that was puzzling to me was on page 8 where Mind-Hur is talking about Marat-Zami, The Great Destroyer. I don't recall any ships being discovered around the destroyed planet known as The Home World. Was it a rogue planet that collided with it? Did I miss something from a previous chapter that described this?

Crusader235Crusader235over 3 years ago
Always

Always exciting to see another chapter of `all that Glitters` appear, and on Valentine's day too! Once again I was absorbed into your world, and loving it. Five Stars! Thank you for it.

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