All Comments on 'All That Glitters Ch. 60'

Thanks for sharing, it was a thoroughly enjoyable read as always.

Keep up the good work, as I am already looking forward to reading the next chapter.

An amazing chapter.

Yet another great chapter, the wait was worth it 5* again. Keep it coming bigtddybr.

Long awaited but excellent continuation of this story. Sorry for the challenges in getting it out but well worth it.

Thanks

Every time I see the title of your story in the listing, my heart begins to beat faster, and my day brightens.

Again a very enjoyable read! Five stars as per usual. 👍👍

This story just keeps getting better and better.

5* fun to read, I hope we won't have to wait so long for the next chapter.

Thanks for this story.

Another enjoyable read. Looking forward to the story progressing.

It is so special and important that you attend to so much proper grammar , spelling , details , etc . As all of this is completely foriegn to everyone but you . But you " bring it home " . Such insightful and long chapters . So fun to read . Thank you Sir .

GREAT story can't wate to read what happens next, it would make a GREAT anime or movies series like game of thrones.

Channeling your inner Julian? The interaction between Barbara & the children cracked me up & immediately brought to mind the scene from the Madagascar movie, where Julian, the king of the ringtailed lemurs breaks into dance & sings, 'I like to move, move! Well done.

Good chapter, as usual. ATG has shaped up into a world class tale. Thanks for sharing & for putting the work in to provide us w/ a free, good read.

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I have really enjoyed this story overall. It is an entire world, not just one character’s arc. I do have one criticism however. You mention several times that the kids aren’t even 2 years old yet. While I like the notion of them being supernatural in their abilities as a guide toward the future of the story I worry that at this point they seem less like toddlers and more like androids. They speak almost 20 languages, never seem to forget any facts, play multiple instruments, can do multi-digit multiplication in their head, have learned multiple combat styles, are trusted by adults to walk the space station on their own and have a firm grasp of the concept of money. It feels like there wouldn’t physically be enough hours in their lives to have encountered all of these things let alone having had time for their hypercurriosity to have explored them. I find myself wanting them to be incredibly advanced 10 or 12 yr olds as opposed to children who would just be potty training. For the story to build the way I think you are heading they need to be amazing, beyond comprehension - and ad I said supernatural. Their powers give them that, so does the worldliness you have given them. My fear is even these traits become less believable if they can do anything and everything that they can think of without fail. Personally I feel their characters would be more believable if they were still limited in some fashion like other children their age.

I applaud your imagination and thank you for sharing ALL THAT GLITTERS with us! Every chapter just leaves us readers wanting more!!!

Did you mean to exclude the Atohan from the list of those who Poda-La will make herself available to speak with in the future?

Would get a 6 if it was possible!