All Comments on 'All That Glitters Ch. 61'

That's a real tearjerker of an ending. You pitted 2 little kids against a trained team of assassins. That is cold. Maudites tabranac!

I really liked this chapter. I can see why it was hard to do then some of your others. Lots of emotion in the last cafeteria scene.

Amazing work, thank you for sharing your genius with us.

Another fantastic chapter, thank you.

You continue to "raise the bar" with this newest update in the ALL THAT GLITTERS saga!!! I salute your intricate weaving of this literary tapestry...this great example of "thrills with chills" with multiple events...this testament to your creative and all-encompassing skill.

Yet another great chapter. Keep it coming 5* again.

5* - except for some serious editing gaffes.

I counted several instances of malapropic work choice errors - to go along with some sorry speeellllingg issues.

Your editing QA is showing some gaps. might want to tighten that up a bit.

Still love your storycraft though.

Very well worth the long wait. Considering how much was contained within this chapter, and how seamlessly you wove everything together, it is no small wonder that it took as long as it did to write. Bravo sir, for this ongoing saga and for giving so many of us the delight of your work

Mankey

Oof, all the feels. I actually teared up a little. So invested in this story!

Wow. I hate the wait. Always worth the wait. Keep up the great story, what an incredible universe you have conceived and proffered up for our entertainment. Takes me away from my problems and leaves me something to look forward to reading as I await the next chapter.

Another wonderfully long chapter . So amazing your creativity and distinctions of all the interspecies cultures , idiosyncracies , particulars , habits , languages and so much more . Your talent is through the roof .

I've enjoyed All Thar Glitters here and now I'm supporting you on Patreon.

Now come on, be honest. "I find myself a might peckish and would like some of your sweetbreads please" is a direct (and deliberate) misquote from Mony Python. Just substitute 'sweetbreads' for 'cheese' and you'll see what I mean. Bigtddybr has used many such references in the past, but I do particularly like this one. And no, it is not plagiarism. In a previous chapter, he actually reminded us an oft-used paraprosdokia, "To steal from one is plagiarism: to steal from many is research.

Really love how this story is moving along, and eagerly awaiting the release of the next chapter.

Since it's still being assumed to be an attack on the children, I wonder if people will assume the church is behind it, since the kids ruined their attempt to disrupt the christmas festivities and everyone heard the leader threaten Junelliya publicly.

That is an interesting thought SensualSigma. The timing could not be more perfect than to expect that, especially if the reporters recorded the pastor saying that? But I doubt they can hide that the assassins were from the CP's infamous assassin squad for long

I was reading the chapter again in preparation of the next chapter coming out and I ran across this line. With there population being an issue, I am wondering how they can just ignore or throw away such a vital resource? Can't the Kumaraie create an institution to care for these orphans? Maybe House of Ur take them?

[It was not unusual for families to leave out to exposure brood members that were not perfect, something that the Kumaraie wanted to change but was currently very much fighting an uphill battle against.]

With there population being an issue, I am wondering how they can just ignore or throw away such a vital resource? Can't the Kumaraie create an institution to care for these orphans? Maybe House of Ur take them?

To Prsstarid: The numbers of injured orphans from Maha-Oran are just too great. We are talking about thousands of children left homeless and orphaned. Both the Pod-Drran and the Maha-Rrin will do what they can and are doing what they can but when millions are injured resources are tight to say the least. They are getting assistance from the Greater Community and will continue to do so but the cost of just getting limb regeneration for the injured is extensive. They are being seen to, which is good in the long run, even if it is taking some time.