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Then began a grueling fifteen minute session in which the parents and Violletiya snapped questions at Kriss while the impatiently waiting children fidgeted uncontrollably. They already knew Kriss would be accepted as their new nanny.
Finally, it was agreed and the children couldn't hold back any longer...
"Aunty Petronellaya, Aunty Elliya, we have big news!! The practically screamed as they jumped up into the laps of the older women... "We gonna have baby brothers!"
Ellaya screamed and hugged Zarreniya tightly while the blood suddenly drained from Petronellaya's face, turning it and sickly shade of white. She peered out at the confused look of Junelliya, and the laughing faces of Fayad, Hanalei, Violletiya, and Sylvie.
End of chapter sixty-three.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 months agoTruly an amazing experience to read waiting for much more of this great journey. Also would make a great net flix series.
Keith62about 2 months agoAwesome I have hardly put it down but have now unfortunately caught up. Time to be patient 😌.
Anonymous2 months agoThank you for your wonderful story. I saw on your biography post that 2024 has been difficult for you so far. I sympathize. Please take care of yourself and your family first. You are very generous to continue to post your story for free on literotica. As for me, I look forward to the next installment of All That Glitters whenever it comes out.
For those who have enjoyed the beautiful imagination and creativity of All That Glitters…please be lavish in your encouragement and stingy with your criticism. All of us are affected by the trials of life at times. A positive word can make a big difference.
Respectfully,
Farmboy
Anonymous2 months ago5 more days then it's 3 months since you posted then it's the garbage, non committed writer file for you, meaning deleted as a writer I read. You went from twice a month to 3 months! sorry not for me
vardicd3 months agoI struggled through the first 10 chapters, took me a few months to read through them, but once I made it to chapter 11 I Finished everything in 2 days. Can't wait for more, though I see no new chapters have been posted for a few months, so I'm hoping it hasn't been abandoned.
Homer21stC3 months agoI’ve read from Chapter 1 to 63. I’m ready for 63 more chapters. Great story, great characters, great sub-plots… just great!
tomnorris4 months agoThis is one of the BEST Stories I have read and can not wait to read what happens next.
DopamineFan4 months agoI just discovered this story about a week and a half ago, and I've spent all my free time since then reading it. Thanks for writing a story that was so interesting that I didn't want to put it down!
That having been said, I think you may need an editor, since there are a lot of places where you've used incorrect words. I've seen wrong uses of "there" and "their", numerous cases where "they" was used instead of "the", several places where you were "are" instead of "our", and the worst of the lot: you seems to consistently write "vice" instead of "versus".
In any case, thank you for sharing this story!
johnrmars5 months agoFantastic story so far. I can't wait to see where the story will take us. And I eagerly await the next chapter.
