All Comments on 'All Things Come... Ch. 04'

I love where your story's going, and keep it coming. What happens at the spa? At Karl's ski trip? Your first person narrator with occasional omniscience works perfectly. keep up the good work!

is Herr Fischer pimping out his wife to the Estonian minister?

Excellent progression on the story line. This makes me wish I had gone further learning German. Perhaps being an educator could have been less repetitive than I'd presumed while in uni.