All Comments on 'All Things Come... Ch. 06'

Style is annoying. This needs an editor's help to separate the paragraphs and add the quote marks, not apostrophies. It is difficult to determine who is talking. The plot is very weak for all these in the series, very few surprises, just the hot sexual encounters make it worth reading. Surprises are not critical, but the characters need more distinction, the dialog for all of them sounds like the narrator speaking. The major plot seems to be making the teacher appear to be a sex god. Okay, but where is the interest?

agree that its hard to tell who is talking