All Comments on 'All We Knew Ch. 05'

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lemonheadslemonheadsabout 9 years ago

Another very good chapter, as long as the couples stay exclusive to each other the story will continue to be good. Can't wait to read what happens next

ChasBChasBabout 9 years ago
Dry.

A bit dry, if you know what I mean. Could have used more descriptive detail about Kevin an Jane's first time. It was over and done before my mind got into it. Same with John and Mary.

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