All Comments on 'All Women are My Servants!'

by LadyYuna

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liz33ndliz33ndover 5 years ago
fast and sweet

The rapid seduction was just what I needed to read.

LostWrenLostWrenalmost 7 years ago
Eastern European?

Does Lady Yuna speak with an accent? That’s the impression I get. If I read her words with a husky Hungarian accent, the story really works--or rather, it has a lot of potential. I’m not saying it should have a vampire theme, but if I imagine her carrying herself with the same demeanor as Bela Lugosi, it’s easy to imagine her hypnotizing women with her eyes and voice. "No, it is only I. Enter and I will examine more closely this...tempting cake." "Have you not thought of doing unnatural, unspeakable things to them?"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
your story title turns me off

come up with a better tittle next time if you want people to read your story

mysecret0109mysecret0109almost 7 years ago
MORE

PLEASE GIVE US MORE

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 7 years ago
ok

I can tell right now this is not going to be a good story, she is to self-centered, and really full of herself

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A nice start for your first story.

I hope you have a good time with all the women you meet and conquer. I would like to ask you to write a story about you seducing my 51yr old wife if you would like to do that her name is Yasmin Diana.

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