All Comments on 'Alli and Jim Ch. 02'

HUBBY ACTS LIKE A RETARD.

Pathetic characters. Especially since they have kids.

Yeah, down the shitty latrine with a big botched turd. So much for the cuck drivel. Stinks and looks like the crap it is.

Done with this scribbler.

Captcha

Same old cuckold shit.

not enough detail about when she's with Jim. Husband roles over because she gives him more sex? Not likely. You have a good premise but not enough plot development or character interaction.

Amazing the idiots are still around. But this author and his story underline it! 1*!!!

Some writers need stop

Hubby needs some balls

He is getting closer to what I commented on your first part... how predictable, but you are at least stretching it over several chapters until he start sucking cum out of her.

Good going, for a cuck shit. Most of cuck writers are toooo inpatient to wait for several chapters.

This story was better, more balanced and erotic than your others. Still needs more detail, more tension.

I did think it was stupid to let some asshole fuck your wife and now I think you can’t help it . But , and here’s what’s important , I did think it was stupid , and you thunk it , I rest my case !

what a weak wimpy cuck 1 star

Sadly Chapter 2 was just as I suspected it would be. Another balless wonder of a husband wimping his way through life.

As said in part 1, as soon as he decided to wait for her, all her respect was gone and part 2 would be a diving into smelly shit! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Does husband drool as well? You know, like some completely retarded, pile of jelly. How fucking idiotic is this moron? The marriage has clearly broken down. Why wasn't he clear to the slut about her NOT fucking her old boyfriend? Or, why didn't he lay it out that now that they had an open marriage, he would be going out to either get a "girlfriend" or arrange for a hot escort. Some one better looking than his slut wife! He's just pathetic.

1 star. One of the worst cuck stories on Literotica. Please don't submit more of this crap. Just go away and ride off into the sunset.

fucking stupid

Cuck drivel, this stupid went exactly as l thought it would.

Appalling story with stupid characters.

Scores deservedly 1/5

You decided to make your shit worse, right? Most of the commentators told you in the last part: "SHUT THE FUCK UP, CUCKOLD!!!"

Hoped it would turn out different after the first chapter... How can he face his own kids after letting Jim cuck him?

Awful, is hubby schizophrenic? Is he boning loverboys mum on the side. Zero stars

"You handled it once you can handle it again?" The schmuck didn't say no. He didn't say, :Have Jim bring a woman for me not a hooker. somebody like his sister. That would have pissed his wife off and taught her a lesson. Why mention the kids all of a sudden when they were not party tot he discussion. Early on you said they'd been together for 20 years so guessing kids were older.

You screwed it up and lost it all with the last two paragraphs where the guy is now a complete cuck. I gave you 2 stars. One of the stars was for writing with decent grammar..

Yes, fuck your mother! Author, because of faggots like you, Australians are already laughing at us and consider us Americans to be worthless weaklings. This is unacceptable! Fix it! Immediately! Jim must die...

Horrible, another stupid wimp of a man and a skank of a wife. Neither have any self respect, or respect for each other.

Renobaby1 and other authors create these insane universes where husbands allow wife to have lovers. Why don’t they write the husband finding some strange? This was technically well written but nothing in the story was interesting. No real drama or anxiety as husband just rolls over and gets excited for sloppy seconds. Meh

Just another cuck story

And slut wife rides again

You kind of wrapped this story up very quickly in the last few sentences, while I was thinking there was more more to the story that could be told. I liked these two characters, and would enjoy reading more about them. Thanks for writing! 4*

Jim is the Champion of the world and Jay is the loser in this game.

Garbage 1*

She's a whore and he is a big asshole wimp they deserve each other if he had any balls he would toss the cunt to the curb

NO,NO, NO!

Author, you're a fucking condom! I'm only for one post to the first part from an Australian about American men, I would strangle you without hesitation... What a shame! What a humiliation!!! And you sit there and keep picking pieces of shit out of your ass and smearing all your compatriots with it...

Not worth half a point.minus 500 is too high.utter crap and poorly written.No talent here

Please warn ahead of a cuckhold story.....1*

This whore is biting something, but it ain’t no apple.

Another 1☆ story from the halls of loving wives. loving wives must be the self proclaimed "Literotica category to decline in reader satisfaction" ever. It has even lost the prestige of capitalization when disparaging comments are made about it! Alli is a selfish piece of work. She cares about herself second, her old boyfriend Jim first and her husband brings up the rear with a distant third place in her heart. It has gone unsaid in the story but Alli's only real use for Jay is to provide for her lifestyle. Jay needs to wake the #*!% up! - TANSTAAFL

0 star - stupid cuck/wimp crap - neither character was likeable

I looked at the rating and then the number of comments, they told me everything I needed to know to bypass another worthless cuck story. Oh wait, it wasn't really a story was it?

I enjoyed the subtle pressure she maintained and the way he caved. Would love to read more as she slowly leads her husband by his dick further and further down the rabbit hole.

Fuck this cuck shit someone report this shit I'm tired of seeing it

This would never happen. Has never happened.

Go the fuck away you pathetic closeted little gay man.

Next time just flush the toilet when youre done and then we wont have this drivel stinking up LW.

Worthless cucks.

just another cuck story

Puke

What is the fascination with cuck stuff. Makes me want to yack.

I’d have divorced her the first time but got stories sake on the ride home I’d have said ok I’ll be fucking a friend also it’s no big deal and my reclaiming my pig wife would be a hard aggressive ass fucking . That’s just where I’d take this story

To the author, thank you kindly for taking the time and making the effort to write this story. I read it and enjoyed it.

I note, as per usual, that group of “readers” have decided to rubbish your work. This is unfortunately common in the “Loving Wives” section of this website.

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Hubby's going to divorce his wife just by going upstairs to her old bf's hotel room but winds up letting her fuck him almost at will. Seriously? What an effin' weakling. When, at 1st, she left her husband & went upstairs, I would've went home & started to divorce action. Of course, I would've also recorded the conversation of her wanting sex with the bf 1st. How many other men will she want down the road? Her bf's friends perhaps? 2 stars -- Bill

This is a cheating story and the husband is cucked. She schemes with an ex boyfriend and uses sex to get the husband to go along. Actually works quite hard at it with an obvious attachment to the ex. You're free to write whatever you want, but to suggest she didn't cheat because she sought permission and he was almost a silent partner doesn't wash. She wanted the security of her married life and the thrill of the ex. Just my opinion.

This is disgusting. How about a warning at the beginning so I don't end up puking at the end of the story. Again....it's disgusting.

What a damned wimp giving in to the cheating bitch.

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