All Comments on 'Allie & Ken are Paid Fantasy Actors'

I'm interested to see where you take this. The critical flaw in all this separating of sex and love nonsense, is that good sex requires an intimate connection and it is this intimate connection that all couples want to keep exclusively for themselves. Otherwise, their own intimate connection amounts to nothing and their love is profoundly diminished.

Please let Ken and Allie rest in peace. Not a good story.It has some interesting possibilities, but you went places with no build up. This needs to be much much longer and more detailed. Flesh out the story and characters. Then, maybe.

would be better in a different category.

Enjoyable. The role-playing is fun.

A reminder to readers about this writing process. Stephen King said that good fiction writers have taught their imaginations to misbehave. The shared objective of erotica, writer and readers, is to allow minds to go to forbidden places. It is ideal for couples who are seeking creative ways to introduce new ways to excite each other. It is a chance for those living alone -- elderly, crippled, dying -- to let their minds go where their bodies no long can go. I am frankly astounded at the pious moralizing about individual characters or couples behavior. I suppose they mean well, but the ignorance of medium and process is remarkable.

This is an exciting different approach. An "indecent Proposal" magnified. The King surely has more fantasy scenarios that you can write about, involving the couple. I would love to read about an impregnation fantasy played out. How about a "Behind the Green Door" fantasy; woman ready to lose her virginity. There are endless fantasy scenes the king could have the couple play out for him.

Intersting setup, it overcame the cuckiness factor. I would like to learn more about these people.

Interesting tale. Not sure it belongs in LW, but don't even have a clue where it should be.

Not my cutoff tea!

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Curses be to my poor typing!

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Sooooo intoxicatingly erotic. More, please.