Allie Pt. 04

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I grimaced at that, and knew just how tired I was, because after hearing that, my brain immediately wanted to push my dick inside of her but my exhausted dick didn't even twitch. I turned my face to her and parted my lips and, like magic, her mouth was on mine - massaging me before she rubbed her nose against mine and licked my cheek one last time.

I shifted our weight so that we could lay down for the night. Or at least what was left of it: was that the goddamn sun coming up!?! Jeez, how long had we been at it? It must have been two hours at least. Her body fit into every nook and cranny of me as we lay there naked on the couch for the last moments that I was conscious. I couldn't believe I hadn't blurted it out yet, after everything we'd done the last few hours.

"I... love you..." I whispered into her head as sleep pulled me under. I didn't hear her respond before I was gone.

...tbc

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Reminds me of.........

This story reminded of my time in the Orient.The women, wow,were some of the most beautiful in the world. Their libido was off the charts. I was a way younger man at the time,I still struggled to keep up.Thanks for the memories. Keep it coming.

JRALynchJRALynchabout 6 years ago
Please Don't Stop

Do please continue this series. It's absolutely brilliant!

niggaplz101niggaplz101over 6 years ago
Please Continue

This Story is beautiful, and your writing is beautiful. Please bless us with another installment.

kodevonishkodevonishover 6 years agoAuthor
This is the fuel I needed...

You are right! This shouldn't be the end. And it won't be ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This can't be the end!

This story NEEDS a conclusion. It has potential to be one of the best stories on this site.

As a black man that loves to read romance erotica it was heavenly to read a pretty well written story starring two ethnic characters that weren't saddled with any cringe worthy stereotyping while also not totally alienating like more than a few of the stories on this site. My favorite part was them making love on the couch oblivious to the video of them fucking on the TV and James letting his feeling slip out there at the end look to be the makings of a sweet ending.

Too bad it seems we may never get that ending.

kodevonishkodevonishalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you all for the feedback!!

I appreciate it very much from you all!

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 8 years ago
Well written

This is one hot story that is well written. You sure pay attention to detail.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Thanks

Wild and yet very sweet at the same time. Lots of great details and nice turns of phrase. Characters seemed real. James melted my cold heart a little. Please keep going!

sober71sober71almost 8 years ago
5*s from start to finish

Looking forward to you continuing this story, please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You're really doing this story justice

Please continue the great work man

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