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nixroxover 2 years ago3 stars for this starting page that has the potential to be the GAN.
I mean every short essay has the potential and this one needs at least 3 or 4 more chapters.
Keep writing - I know you have more ideas for this start.
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SoCaliDude@SoCaliDudeRaised in L.A./Orange Counties. BA & AA degrees. Dodgers, Lakers, Rams fan. Divorced/teenage son.
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