All Comments on 'Allie's Garden'

That said (4/5), even though i don't dig my MC's dying it was pretty well done.

This is erotic horror, not non-human. If the mc lived through the experience, and enjoyed enough that she would go back again, then it would have been non-human. The result of her death, and the particularly gruesome way it happens, makes this horror.

Having your MC die at the end definitely places this into the horror category: -1star. While I'm glad that you took the time to explain the plant's reasons for wanting to screw a human (+1 star), it could've been done better, such as maybe a scientific journal and/or news blurb like you'd done at the end (-1 star). There were a lot of basic grammar errors in here which detracted from the story for me (-1 star). Overall: decent. Could use some polishing up. 3/5 stars.

Started out good, proceeded well, the ending... I don't even have a penis and you have killed my boner. (TT.TT)

Need to add consumption fetish tag.

I dont think this classifies as fetish. It was pretty good, but I think the author was just attempting to create a good ending to the tentacle porn story...

I honestly thought it was a decent ending. Definitely an eerie ending, but pretty good for a porn story. It was a short story with a death to a character we didn't know well enough to morn. This was basically a good Goosebumps story for adults.

Definitely wasn't expecting horror but I liked it

Sorry, but the ending on the second page killed any interest I had. Death isn't enjoyable. 1/5.

Dark ending, I like it

Seriously the fuck. Why must you scare the boner like that.