All Comments on 'Allison 01'

Nice!!!! I assume there are more chapter, can’t wait to see them!!!

Please let there be more chapters!

Can’t wait for the next one

Nice premise.

Sex moved ahead a bit too fast.

Would have used more preliminaries/foreplay.

Would have been nice if she told him where and how she wanted to be massaged.

Would have been better if she asked him if he was enjoying massaging her as she was getting massaged.

Four stars.

I thought it was great. Love stories of "good novice" girls sucumb to older men.

You're a great writer. I've thoroughly enjoyed everything you've put out.

You have quite the knack of non consensual without meanness, gratuitous cruelty or gratutious vulgarity. Love the way Allison is used and coerced, fooled as well as Jenny in your other stories.

You get inside their heads. Cant wait to read more of your stuff.