All Comments on 'All's Fair in Love and War Ch. 03'

I like this story a lot, but it kinda feels like I'm reading facts and not an actual story. This has so much potential, you need to slow it down a bit more instead of jumping around from 3 years, to a month, to the next day. Explain her feelings as to why she was running away from him. These are just positive critics that i hope will help you with your story. <3

Anonymous is right. Slow down a bit and let their love for each other progress through the story

I enjoyed this chapter. Hopefully they will be longer next time

Looking forward to the next chapters!