All Comments on 'Ally and Emma Pt. 02'

The bathroom sex was great/very hot and Erin’s interruption fun, but the way you teased us toward both ends well crafted — very tumescent. Like how you’ve brought Emma and Ally together — hopefully more about that relationship as well as other bits of your imagination.

Great story the bathroom sex was awesome and I can't wait for part 3.

Hm, Compared to the first chapter, I was less into it. The whole realisation that Ally likes Em, and then the sensual attack in the dark, quick bathroom sex with interruption was a fast follow-up for me that made me question Ally's character. It's like Ally did go from being an almost 'virgin', being embarrassed when sex is mentioned (chapter one) to becoming a woman who takes first action, and is being called a slut' happened at the speed of light here. Also, the names were mixed up a few times, and for me Erin's interruption while having bathroom sex brought me out of the (sexual) flow. But I'm looking forward to a next part! Thanks for sharing

Bathroom sex was so hot...totally got me there

I can't wait for more.